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''Life Is a Clicking Clock''

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"Life has no limitations except the ones your make."

I lost my father suddenly with no goodbye Oh, all of my life he had been my rock I looked down at him and of course I wept why, why Now, part of me is chained with a brass lock Father had many quotes that made my young soul fly He said life is about each building block On nature hikes I first saw beauty through his eye I will miss always our long walks and talk Now, I glide in a blue sky drifting up high, high I dip, float and soar like an orphaned hawk And at his cold tomb I sing him a lullaby Rest in peace . . . "as life is a clicking clock" _______________________ June 14, 2022 Poetry/Quatrain/''life is a clicking clock'' Copyright Protected, ID 06-1465-611-14 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/15/2022

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Date: 6/17/2022 11:18:00 AM
as a father you have deeply touched me, line by line the memories return...thank you...you have done an excellent job as a poet....moved us
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Constance La France
Date: 6/18/2022 1:06:00 PM
Timothy, thank you so much for the visit and the nice comment, and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/17/2022 4:09:00 AM
Love this as also the tribute to your mom in another poem. You seem to be in a pensive, nostalgic frame of mind.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/18/2022 1:07:00 PM
Seeker, thank you for the compliment, yes, that is a good way to describe me, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/14/2022 8:05:00 PM
Wrapping my arms around you. Two parents, often united, but with something special to leave us with. This will be a winner!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/18/2022 1:08:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the lovely comment, and encouragement, though not a winner, as we know there is no telling if sponsors will like our poems, blessings ~Constance

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