Sarita Milliner Poet Rhyme

Life In a Perfect World

Life in a Perfect World 

In a Perfect world negativity, would be null and void,
With Humans living in harmony, all on one accord!
No labels placed nor disrespect, or need for vanity,
Love would be free flowing, through all humanity!

In a perfect world there would be, no vast poverty,
Or lack of food and clothing, or dis-placed families!
Opportunities would be equal, regardless of one’s sex,
Men and Women working together, no movies rated “X!”

In a perfect world absolutes, would be without dispute,
With optical illusions becoming, segments of visual truths!
All things within our grasp, would be a great sight to see,  
In a perfect world we’d all enjoy, life’s limitless possibilities!

Written: © 2/16/16
Submitted for poetry contest: Second Chance #2
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Faraz Ajmal June 18, 2017 at 3:30 PM A very beautiful written poem, but what you re describing is impossible, as devil lives with us and he s always their to help us go in wrong way,no one can ever get equal opportunities, their are people who are very rich and their are people who don t have money to eat, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them Sarita Milliner June 18, 2017 at 3:49 PM Thanks, Faraz for your visit, compliment, and views. However, I am a believer that all thing are possible and within our grasp. The devil can't win if we don't give in! And yes, I will visit your work.

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2016 at 11:27 PM SARITA, NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, Congratulations on your "Second Chance #2 WIN." Love LINDA Sarita Milliner April 28, 2016 at 9:15 AM Thank you Linda, I appreciate the love <3

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 7:51 AM Anytime

Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 12:59 AM Hello, Sarita, the feeling of this perfect world is awesome. But, to realize we don't live in a flawless world is heart wrenching, however, I like to believe we are limitless and living in a world where all is possible. Well done, the best of luck in this contest. LINDA Sarita Milliner February 18, 2016 at 7:40 AM Many thanks, Linda!!

Dorian Petersen Potter February 17, 2016 at 7:54 PM Excellent pen Sarita!Very beautifully painted piece.Thank God one day the world will be perfect, but that will take place only under the reign of Jesus.A7! Thank you so much for your kind visit n' nice comment on my poem, very deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D. Sarita Milliner February 17, 2016 at 8:06 PM Thank you very much Dorian, glad that you enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2016 at 5:36 PM A rosy view, Sarita. Nicely done! Sarita Milliner February 17, 2016 at 8:12 PM Thanks Andrea, I was in a Utopian state of mind at the time of this write!

Elaine George February 17, 2016 at 1:01 PM This would be a perfect world. Great writing, Sarita. Elaine Sarita Milliner February 17, 2016 at 1:03 PM Thanks Elaine!!

Diane Christian February 16, 2016 at 3:14 PM very nice too Sarita Milliner February 16, 2016 at 3:26 PM Diane, I think our minds were traveling on simiular tracks! Thanks