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Life In a Cake

To make a good cake, one has to use the right ingredients to make it tasty, shapely and attractive to look at One has to mix the different ingredients at different stages, in order to have the right texture Finally, one has to put the cake in the oven, and bake it at the right temperatures at a specified time interval Just like making a cake, we ought to make the right choices, in order to make our lives pleasant and peaceful We ought to go one step at a time in the choices we make, in order to have a balanced life To have a successful life, we ought to have patience, and right spirit of persistence A successful life and a well-baked cake in the end depend on the choices we make at every stage

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Date: 2/23/2015 12:49:00 PM
I can almost taste the intention here Teddy and thanks for the comment..'
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/24/2015 12:14:00 AM
Welcome Joe. Thanks for commenting on my work. ;-)

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