Life Has Lessons

Warm apricot jam is this                  life.
Jam melted running into corners      is
where lessons are learned;              a
little hard or real hard ones in          succession.

Ideas, ideals that we dream             of
become those valuable hard             lessons.
In time we see they are                   which
produce character, these are a          must.

Mistakes, oversights, wrongs must    be
lived over and lived over and            lived
again until we learn  the lessons       to
life, which will forever                      be
ingrained into our being, then          understood  

End line: A quote from Ralph Waldo Emerson

A Finish

A bright clear light of the rising sun
Reveals the dark corners are now clean
The Apricot Jam has changed into clear light
All the lessons are melded into one fine character

Inspired by HGarvey Daniel Esquire's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deschler Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 11:15 PM
I agree, the only way we can learn is by living and discovering right from wrong on our own... Your end line poem was very, very well written. Congrats on a great win, Sara!
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Very nice write, Sara. Lots a of meaning here.
Romaine Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 3:20 PM
Hey Sara, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful win! A great treatise on the many varied lessons of life. Excellent. Be Blessed, Neva
A  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:05 PM
Congrats on huge win Sara with this superb write!
Callus Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:41 AM
I agree with you, Sara...life teaches while we learn (if we pay enough attention!). We cannot live in the past, but we can learn from it in order to achieve a better present and future. I think I ought to order some of your apricot jam:) ~ Congrats on a very merited win. Regards // paul
Zubair Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations, taste life before it sucks flavour out of you
Nunez Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 1:32 PM
This is very good, Sara. I like it. Inspired... So you did not enter it? A pity... hugs!
La France Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Sara, very nice for the contest, well done and thanks for visiting my poem, October flowers
Hunjeri Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 4:06 PM
And yes very wise lessons to heed from your poem. Thank you:-)
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Your words speak with the power of experience and your mind set flows onto the page and we can share their wisdom with you. Emile.
Raha Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 10:30 AM
deep philosophical content with a touch of wisdom.Enjoyed this a lot.Good luck in the contest.
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