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Life Got Disastered By Her Love An Unreal Love

Me, the creator was living alone, with my friends and relatives around me, but a single person with all sadness in mind, feeling alone in the moments I lived..... I saw her in my work area, seemed to be quiet, felt as she is made for me.... Met her in person, asked her for a date.... Dated with her, Chatted with her.... I wasn't aware, but she came in my life..... Inside my personals, she was playing..... Her interference were intolerable..... But, here, I was unable to react.... My sense and sensitivity were stolen.... One fine day, she went off from my life, as she came into it..... I was broken..... Broken like a mirror..... Even unable to cry.... I was broken..... When came the process..... process of questioning about the mishap.... She answered..... Without any feeling in the face.... No, I was unable to read the feeling..... Answer flowed like...... Her Love was unreal.... She had some infatuation on me..... Its now been gone for ever...... Now am living in this world like a petal..... Flying in the wind..... Never kept in any head..... Always left in dust.....
To the reader: I do not think that the above mentioned is a poem. But I scribbled the words came into my mind...... Please ignore any mistakes......

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Date: 5/27/2011 9:54:00 PM
I am new, trying to learn the art of writing poem myself. I think either You are of broken heart or your nearest one. I think it is a poem of love of sadness.
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Roopesh Krishna
Date: 5/28/2011 4:10:00 AM
Welcome Devnath to the Poetry site..... I am also unaware of the art in writing a poetry. But I will scribble the words coming to my mind in a piece of paper. ..... As you have mentioned...... Yes I am with a broken heart.... I think that Sadness and the Love I kept to her reflects in this.....

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