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December 22, 2024

Ten Lines From Ten Poems Poetry Contest

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Aquamarine horizon with crimson hue unfolds a picture of dawn, Lose myself in a tranquil tangerine reverie... My heart beams and beats softly inhaling the tenderness of your love, Earth's music envelops my soul, Life goes on even though hopes are crushed. My path would not drift from yours, How did I not know where my true love was! A symphony of chimes soaring from a temple far away, Flowers blossom serenading their fragrance and chanting their melodious songs, Your fragrance brought me back to harmony of life ! 1. Reverie In Colours 2. Tangerine Reverie 3. Would You Love Me 4. My Path To You 5. Dream Catchers 6. If Only Butterflies 7. In Search Of You 8. Symphony Of Sunrise 9. If Only You Knew 10. Drowned In Your Fragrance

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Michael Tor

Date: 12/31/2024 2:50:00 AM

Great words full of life and passion within you Malabika. Hoping the New Year is better then the last one. God bless you Dear...

Michael Tor
Date: 1/2/2025 12:41:00 PM

Yes Dear I will definitely read your blog and comment. You are such a talented writer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/31/2024 3:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Michael, for stopping by and leave an inspiring comment! You are very kind, Michael, and I am proud to be your friend. Glad you are back after a short break. I am staying engaged with a memoir-writing project this year, and on and off trying to catch up with Soup activities. Two days ago I excitedly posted a blog about my progress in the project...I shall be delighted if you have a few minutes to have a look at it! Last day of 2024...I wish you a joyful, healthy and happy New Year! Blessings ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/27/2024 11:55:00 AM

remarkable weave of warm, romantic images, malabika!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/30/2024 5:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Nette! I was intrigued by this unusual contest, and was delighted to go back and read many of my poems written in the past five years. Appreciate your thoughtful comment, will look forward to reading yours. Wish you a wonderful Happy New Year!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2024 10:41:00 PM

A nice selection of lines you put together for this lovely poem, Mala

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/30/2024 5:30:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I have to look at yours - must be really charming!