Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Life Goes On

Life goes on past my lifetime.
Hard to believe...
Bereft!
I think I shall watch from heaven.
Better than a blockbuster movie —
the other side of nasty and nice.
Shall I turn toward those golden streets?
Greet each day at the Pearly Gates?
Or shall I look downwards to my progenies
to see the mess or mass celebration.
I hear the ecstasy of choiring cherubim.
I turn toward fruity trees releasing
color, shape and scent.
I take an unforbidden bite.
Each bite releases endorphins.
Doubting her meal will turn out right.
Burnt rice, too crispy chicken.
Oh...oh...she’s turned her face
in the right direction.
Correction of error.
Giving thanks to God Almighty.
Now I’m all ears —
she has my attention.
Does she feel my smile?
I’ll hug her for awhile.

6/12/2021

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Bj Legros Kelley June 15, 2021 at 11:54 PM I have felt some of my beloved who now abide in heaven were intricately interested in some of the intensities here in my life. There are so many times I have felt like there was a smile from heaven, a dream given to me as a gift from God, and loved ones there! I love this!!!! Kim Rodrigues June 16, 2021 at 3:42 AM Thank you, BJ! A lovely comment! <3

Joseph P. DiMino June 13, 2021 at 6:09 PM I am certain you are right. I've lost count of the times when I say something...and then pause -- thinking that that sounded just like my father; and could not have entirely originated in me alone. Lovely, adorable read. Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2021 at 4:11 AM Thank you, Joe! My husband was making a meal he hadn’t made before but that he had watched his late mother make. It was amazing his “self-talk” remembering how his mom made this recipe and the oohs and ahhs that came from our holiday dinner. I think she must have whispered in his ear. God bless you, sweet friend!

Judy Ball June 13, 2021 at 5:46 PM This was a sweet and fun read my friend. It was as if I was watching a movie where the mom passes on and is hanging around to guide her children after she is gone. Great job. God Bless, JB Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2021 at 4:12 AM Thank you, Judy! Big smiles :) God bless!

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2021 at 12:07 PM this was a fun read. I always wonder if anyone up there is looking down on me. I sure hope my brother Dale is. Probably I will get to go see soon enough! Kim Rodrigues June 14, 2021 at 4:13 AM I will soup mail you. Thank you, dear one.

Regina Mcintosh June 12, 2021 at 6:43 PM LOVE LOVE LOVE this. Amazing poem. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2021 at 11:12 AM Thank you so much :)

Victor Buhagiar June 12, 2021 at 12:41 PM The loss of a dear one is not easily forgotten. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2021 at 11:13 AM Never forgotten...hugs ~ Kim

Vijay Pandit June 12, 2021 at 7:11 AM What a wonderful perspective, Kim! Enjoyed the ride on your thoughts. Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2021 at 11:14 AM Thank you, dear friend!