Life does not wait for me to delay or to catch up, it is flowing ever onward, steady like a river it is said, carrying seconds, minutes, hours, days then years into the eternal sea; life does not return for me, like rain cycling round and round ~ I will soon come to river's end then simply fade into a memory.
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