Life Cycle of a Leaf

Fresh spring green was I when first born
Upon a sunny late March morn
But a deeper emerald I became
Drenched by April’s pounding rain

All summer long I held my own
Granting reprieves with shadows thrown
For picnics I provided shade
Feeling such joy as children played

But bodies change as seasons pass
Now multi-hues I have amassed
Yellow, amber and crimson red
But I still hung as others fled

The nearby oak is now stripped bare
Upon the soil my mates lay there
Maple leaves too have joined the pile
And I’m the last to stay awhile

Many colors adorn below
Paths where fall hikers like to go
I’m in God’s hands; he holds the keys
But oh, dear Lord, here comes a breeze



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 4:07 PM
Congrad's Couldn't be in better comapny. Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Such a brilliant ending line Carolyn. Congrats on a lovely verse. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 4:58 PM
such a sweet chuckle of an ending! congrad's light & love
Ramage Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Well done, such a beautiful poem. Carolyn, you always write such great poems. I hope you have these published soon. They are a great keepsake. Love Lee
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Such heart in this beautiful poem, Carolyn, the deep melancholy makes me ponder and remember those I've loved, who lie beneath the leaves. Just breathtaking. (Should have placed higher!) Best wishes and congrats!
Quigley Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 10:43 AM
Love this Carolyn. Reality with just a touch of humor. Congratulations
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in my contest "Leaves Leaves Leaves" judged today 10/12/2011. Thank you for your support of my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Babcock Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 2:24 PM
YES, we were thinking along the same lines and you did a wonderful write Carolyn. Fall is a sad time as I look at the barren trees for winter is a long season and my least favorite. love phyl
Song Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 5:23 PM
As a science major, I love anything that is entitiled LIFE CYCLE! lol...I just finished reading Robert Hinshaw's entry..You two think alike and spin it completely differently. Throughout your write, as the tree maturates, so does its behavior and those who enjoy it...from lil ones...to the fall hikers. I AM ONE OF THOSE FALL HIKERS!! So many great lines..love the blending of maple and oak leaves.....oh, here comes a breeeeze....exhilarating. Love, Gwendolen
Song Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 5:24 PM
Do u have a sister who is also on PS? .....
Freeman Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 10:27 PM
Somewhat of an abrubt ending Carolyn, O well time to fall apart into open arms as a heavenly substance Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:15 PM
VERY nice, CArolyn. Great idea for personification and I loved the ending of this one! Hope it does great in the contest. I hope I am not going to be late for this contest!
Poet Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 3:45 PM
Very nice personification of a leaf with changing of seasons....enjoyed.
Merryman Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 1:37 PM
This is so cute! Kim
Horne Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 10:18 AM
What a great idea, to compare your life to that of a leaf! Let's hope that breeze leaves you on the tree for a good while yet. A surefire winner, love. Many congrats on your wins too, of course
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Zzzzz Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 7:34 AM
A good, inventive write. It could be viewed as an allegory...good broad space for interpretation! Love, Robert.
Devnath  Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 4:03 AM
Congrats for your win. Here in your write last line touched me much. Thanks for sharing. Good day. bl
Maverick Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 4:07 PM
i mean this contest..
Maverick Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 4:06 PM
A very poignant and full write Carolyn, enriching by your words and thoughts the pages we read, all the best in your contest.
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Like the dash of humor in the end..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in Carol's contest..It should be a good one with many great writes..Thanks for the understanding of my Limerick..Sara
Johnson Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Great writing Carolyn. I think you and I were entering at the same time. Love, Joyce
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