Life As It Was

Kids admire butterflies
in history magazines and science
journals, wondering where they
vanished to. The price of a honey
jar is equated to that of an emerald;
life is not as it was then….. 

By: Teddy Kimathi

Published in: Literature Today Journal, Issue #1

(The first issue of this poem was themed on man's relationship with the environment.
My piece shows how life might be in the future, if we don't take care of our environment. Our actions today, will determine how the future will be, for our future generation.....)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Raven Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Excellent as always my friend. Simple and straight to the point. Enjoyed the read....Mike.
Kimathi Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Thank you so much Vlad, for your kind applause, and enjoying my piece!! :-)
Devnath  Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, bl
Kimathi Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Thanks so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece, BL!! :-)
A   Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Nice win...Teddy,,Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
Kimathi Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you so much for your kind applause, as always, and featuring my work in your blog!! *^_^* <3 <3
A   Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 12:36 AM
I'm so catching up on my old replies. :)
Kimathi Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Lol. You are not alone. I'm catching up with my old comments too.... ;-)
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:55 AM
many congrats on this being published and now it is showcased further with a win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 4:00 AM
Thank you Jan! ^_^
A   Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Teddy, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
Kimathi Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 3:59 AM
You are always welcome buddy! ^_^ + thank you for congratulating my work! Your blogs are the best! ;-)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 9:55 PM
well done terry very beautifully painted piece
Kimathi Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Thank you Liam! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Congrats on your publication of this. I really enjoyed it tonight.
Kimathi Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 7:45 AM
Thank you for enjoying my work, and applause Andrea! ^_^
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