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Life As It Was

Kids admire butterflies in history magazines and science journals, wondering where they vanished to. The price of a honey jar is equated to that of an emerald; life is not as it was then….. By: Teddy Kimathi Published in: Literature Today Journal, Issue #1 (The first issue of this poem was themed on man's relationship with the environment. My piece shows how life might be in the future, if we don't take care of our environment. Our actions today, will determine how the future will be, for our future generation.....)

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Date: 7/23/2016 8:03:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Excellent as always my friend. Simple and straight to the point. Enjoyed the read....Mike.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/24/2016 6:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Vlad, for your kind applause, and enjoying my piece!! :-)
Date: 7/23/2016 5:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, bl
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/24/2016 5:58:00 AM
Thanks so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece, BL!! :-)
Date: 7/23/2016 12:56:00 PM
Nice win...Teddy,,Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/24/2016 5:56:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you so much for your kind applause, as always, and featuring my work in your blog!! *^_^* <3 <3
Date: 1/16/2015 12:36:00 AM
I'm so catching up on my old replies. :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/16/2015 1:04:00 AM
Lol. You are not alone. I'm catching up with my old comments too.... ;-)
Date: 1/3/2015 9:55:00 AM
many congrats on this being published and now it is showcased further with a win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/5/2015 4:00:00 AM
Thank you Jan! ^_^
Date: 1/2/2015 10:24:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/5/2015 3:59:00 AM
You are always welcome buddy! ^_^ + thank you for congratulating my work! Your blogs are the best! ;-)
Date: 11/1/2014 9:55:00 PM
well done terry very beautifully painted piece
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/2/2014 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Liam! :-)
Date: 10/29/2014 12:56:00 AM
Congrats on your publication of this. I really enjoyed it tonight.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/29/2014 7:45:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying my work, and applause Andrea! ^_^

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