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Life and Rhymes of a Poet

The words and sentences I create filling page after page with rhyme but my stories tend to deviate seen it before time after time for work I am nearly always late forever searching for that killer line so much so, the boss can wait chef just smiles and says it's fine he's pretty cool, never does berate i'm always ten minutes after nine with bleary eyes and hair a state I look a proper lazy swine like a bowl of soup served on a plate but can't you sense my divine? ©John-Ovan.P.Hull

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/4/2012 1:31:00 PM
I see you have the word "chef" in your eighth line. Do you work in a kitchen? This is all decently descriptive work with appropriate rhyming included.
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John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 2/6/2012 9:15:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments Robert, Well done, yes i do indeed work as a chef!
Date: 1/27/2012 11:50:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Elvis Presley" John-Ovan. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:14:00 AM
It's easy to let ones self get caught up in the writing of poetry...always afraid if you put the pen down...you will miss that all important line !! Enjoyed !!
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