Life According To Valerie

Happiness is an achievement, not an entity to borrow
I’m a borderline cynic, motivated only somewhat by tomorrow

Despite friendly intentions, aggression paves my road
Seemingly simple yet harshly taciturn, I carry not a light load

People think me judgmental, but it’s really just distrust
I open myself up to those around me, only if I must 

Raised as a burden, my mantra is one of practicality
Yet I crave to be noticed, not just cast off as a triviality 

Hesitant indeed, my sleepless eyes and fumbling hands
It is impossible to meet your every demand

“Please meet me halfway”, I type with my fingers
Ephemeral is your presence, as it no longer lingers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 25, 2016 at 11:04 PM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, VALERIE. SKAT
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November 5, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Hi Valerie, hope to see you post a new poem soon. SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations for your WIN and placement Valerie! ;-)
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November 4, 2015 at 3:45 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem - I wish you luck with many more poems - A pleasure to meet you here, Valerie :) - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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November 3, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Valerie, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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October 30, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Hi Valerie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 30, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Great poem! Goodluck in the contest and welcome to Poetrysoup!
Christian Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:13 AM
good poem and hello, good luck in the contest
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October 29, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Valerie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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