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Life : In Deepest Thought

Dark clouds circle me like sharks As the storms prepare to strike I lay vulnerable awaiting the sparks Awaiting for one last fight And my courage pulls up and parks Then suddenly this all seems like spite Life greeting me like that, with a knife and fork Life seems barren, it must be a dungeon And the after-life, a force fed fantasy Pulling me down as I hang on to religion Refusing the whole live and die mentality As being truly alive fuels my rebellion And I watch as sociality slaughters Humanity, I watch as morality falls in its legions 04/04/2016

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Date: 8/18/2016 4:38:00 PM
Ronny, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog After you. With Love SKAT
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:25:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Ronny:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2016 12:12:00 PM
A great poem x well written
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Date: 4/12/2016 6:38:00 AM
Awesome and thought provoking Ronny.. love the imagery throughout :)
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:50:00 PM
This flows lyrical in my hearing......great poem.........A.M.
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Date: 4/10/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thought provoking write Ronny - really really love the imagery in the first line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2016 2:13:00 AM
Life is full of mystery. And that's about it. Nice theme and piece you have here.
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:45:00 AM
- A great poem Ron, deep thoughts about life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2016 7:35:00 AM
There is indeed much to ponder when we think of this life and the next. You might appreciate my poem Shattering Rose Glasses.
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