Life

Blue sky, two clouds clash Lightning thunder rain, they pass Clear sky back again ______________________________________ July 17, 2017

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/28/2017 11:23:00 PM

This one such positive thought my dear friend! A silver lining to a very dark cloud! Thanks for this wonderfully penned haiku. I'm just trying this form. :) Regs Sunita

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/20/2017 7:28:00 PM

All of that in three sentences... isn't nature great.....the symphony of storm....

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/18/2017 6:11:00 AM

Yeah, this is life, a vicious circle:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/19/2017 9:54:00 PM

Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2017 8:31:00 AM

Such truth, my friend!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/19/2017 9:55:00 PM

Yes ... Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/17/2017 1:58:00 AM

True! Life is like that! ...thunderous my friend Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/19/2017 10:12:00 PM

Right ... Thank you ...

Aurore Severo

Date: 7/16/2017 10:39:00 PM

Very enlightening!!! hahahahaha I really did enjoy this xoxoxo

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/19/2017 10:19:00 PM

Thank for your insightful comments ...