Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  This is a "Tanka" or Japanese verse form write on the subject: "Life."  For this write, I've looked at "Life" from the perspective of what should we do with it since the actual concept of "Life" itself is at once quite all-encompassing and overwhelming.  The notions I've developed in this instance actually reflect to a large degree my own personal view and application concerning "Life."  The syllable count for this Tanka is:  5-7-5-7-7 (for a total of 31 syllables).  (Gary Bateman - November 12, 2014) (Tanka poetic format)    

Categories:  adventure, allegory, change, growth, inspirational, introspection, and life.

Life

Live Life to the completely—
Seek always new adventures.
Find your destiny . . . 
	 Emphasis the positive . . . 
Always give your best effort!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, 
Schoeningen, Germany (November 12, 2014)
(Tanka poetic format)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thirtyseven Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:33 AM
A very positive, thoughtful Tanka. Well penned.
Bateman Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Thanks Scott!! I appreciate your read and comments here very much. Best Always, Gary
Anish Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Uplifting message here. And done in fine form! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Bateman Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Matt, Thanks so much here for your wonderful comment!! I am glad you like this particular poem. I must get over to check out your latest poems as well!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Dynamic and thought provoking, my friend Gary!
Bateman Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:00 PM
Demetrios . . . Thanks so much my wonderful colleague and good friend. Life do offer us many challenges, but many rewards too. Best Always, Gary
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:18 PM
Gary,good write, advice to follow. :) hugs eve
Bateman Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Eve, Thanks for dropping by and for your read here. Glad you liked it!! Best Always, Gary
Meade Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 10:26 PM
A road map for a generous life. Nicely done my friend.
Bateman Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:06 PM
David . . . Thanks so much!! Glad you liked it. I enjoy too your writes very, very much. Best Always, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Very inspirationa Gary my good friend! A 7 for you! Love and hugs! xxxx D
Bateman Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Glad you liked this one too "D." I wish you always all the best!! Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:08 PM
powerful pen gary
Bateman Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Liam Mate!! Thanks. You say Powerful Pen. I say Powerful Leprechaun Mate. Best!! Gary
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Very uplifting Gary...a 7 rate from me.
Bateman Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:12 PM
Tim . . . Thanks my good friend. Glad you liked it and I do appreciate the "7"!! Best Always, Gary
Nance Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Very true! A nice presentation to an encouraging Tanka, Well done Gary!
Bateman Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Thanks Cas!! I will be dropping by to check out your latest works!! Best Always, Gary
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