Life

The colors drift
With the winds of winter
Drafts dapple and draw
A sequence of life
Ever changing
But always the same
Once it begins
It never ends
And so life goes…

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Laura Breidenthal

November 7, 2014 at 9:07 PM

I like the imagery this poem invokes. Change seems to be a significant aspect of life. Lovely poem here drifting in and out of melancholy colors. Always, Laura

Barbara Gorelick

November 2, 2014 at 8:12 PM

My dear, so good to read this kind of poem from you. Yes, and so it goes. Life can suck, but you have given me hope that you feel a bit better. BG wonderful poem, BTW

Stephen Kilmer

November 2, 2014 at 10:17 PM

Thanks Barbara. I know it's hard to imagine me being upbeat! :) ~Kilmer