Life

I was born I was teething My teeth fell out They came back They fell out again I died

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Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 4/18/2014 9:19:00 AM

Yep...That pretty much sums it up! Great write :) Ana

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2014 8:07:00 PM

Thanks Ana, Happy Easter

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/26/2014 8:41:00 PM

Life happens - what can we do? Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/28/2014 10:08:00 PM

Gracious Lucilla, sorry haven't been around, so nice though to always hear from you!!!!

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/23/2014 7:46:00 PM

Guess I am in stage 3 don't fancy them coming out again.....lol. Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2014 11:00:00 PM

LOL I wish this on no one, I hate dentists!!!

David Williams

Date: 2/23/2014 1:28:00 PM

Arthur a good ditty on life....David

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2014 10:58:00 PM

Thanks David, hope you doing well!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2014 8:48:00 AM

charming process of life's stages woven in deeply with bubbly wit, arthur...no cavities, i hope.. huggs!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2014 10:58:00 PM

Thank you, was just a fast witty outlook on life!