Life

LIFE

we    alike the stars
all millions of miles apart
all so lonely
trying to outshine others
but dying in the process

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 1:30:00 PM

Here is another one (at third place)and I had faved in the past. NO WONDER. this is absolutely wonderful, Daver. one of your very best.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/30/2011 2:25:00 AM

this one is really deep, Dave :) wow- love the thoughts you put in here-- and yup, I am back to being Nikko :) heehee you are right I might get stuck being known as Oink, not too appealing ;) & Austin Reynolds-- hmm pretty nice name there too but I like your own name loads more... hugs :D

Elaine George

Date: 3/17/2011 9:37:00 AM

TO MY FAV'S - SO PROFOUND!!!! HOPE YOU ENTER THIS ONE IN A POETRYSOUP CONTEST. Love, Lainie

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/15/2011 11:10:00 AM

Vanity vanity all is vanity and chaseing of the wind..great words today Daver.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/15/2011 7:13:00 AM

This poem has a deeper meaning than it presents on the surface. If we stop trying to outshine others, we could capture the light of togetherness and the universe would be a much brighter place! Have a great one! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2011 11:10:00 PM

Daver, I really appreciate your comments today. I can't stay up any later to look for your older poems. I missed too much sleep last night not realizing the clock was set forward and having to get to church . I hope to see a new one from you soon, ok?? Thanks for reading mine as you always so kindly do.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2011 1:10:00 PM

Great one, Daver..Sometimes life is a really lonely road..Enjoyed reading today...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2011 11:02:00 AM

Have you read "Many Lives, Many Masters" by Dr. Brian Weiss, Daver? Highly recommend this book. But you already know I'm a believer. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2011 8:14:00 PM

ooo! nice Daver,, and how is one of my favorite poets doing... a very deep thought on life here... i think,, your thinking is like mine... lol.. its called reason.. what is the reason.. of being,,if we will not be one day... take care,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2011 4:27:00 PM

wow, this one is DEEP, DAver, you could make it into a crystalline and do Linda's current contest with this beauty. A fave for it!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/12/2011 2:25:00 PM

Stark reality of the human life, nice analogy,daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2011 10:27:00 AM

So profound, Daver. This certainly does seem to be the case. Well stated, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/12/2011 5:52:00 AM

How true this is, awesome. Harry

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/12/2011 5:28:00 AM

Hi Dave, what a great description of our lives, Dave! I am sorry no being able to write as many comments as I'd like to, but my right arm and hand still hurts. Have a great weekend! Love, Gert