Life

Depressed in life's quest 
this cancer manifests.
Possessed, stressed by this
unyielding pest.
I am obsessed with myself
mostly when undressed.
There are not many who will protest
that poetically I am blessed.
The best in my world
A master of my own conquest..

Jared Pickett
7/26/2010
Asavvy1

lifecancerfree verse

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September 4, 2010 at 1:05 PM

I love this Jared. You're still my favorite poet. ILY...Love Scarlett

Joyce Johnson

August 20, 2010 at 4:42 PM

Nothing like having lots of confidence to become a success. I liked it Jared. Thanks for the soupmail but I don't know how to post it since the contest is gone and I don't know how to put it on there. Too bad. It was good. I used your name as the Acrostic.It's called A Day to Savor if you want to look for it. Love, Joyce

Phyllis Babcock

August 2, 2010 at 10:54 AM

liked this one Jared. Expressed how I feel at one time or another. HIT it on the head. Have a great day. GOD bless Phyl

Doris Culverhouse

July 30, 2010 at 5:58 PM

Hey Jared, have not heard much from you lately...you must be on another site more.

Samuel Brooks

July 28, 2010 at 1:35 PM

Outstanding write my brotha. You really nailed this one. Made make you one of my Favorite poets.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 27, 2010 at 9:32 PM

This is truly a perfect picture of u.. and its a dynamic concept of words ..well written and rhymed ..to my liking very much.. think I'll just have to make it a FAV... those wonderful lines... I am obsessed with myself mostly when undressed...kinda fits the "Sweetheart" too..haha..no wonder u recognize my poetry so easily..haha..with luv..

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