Life

Depressed in life's quest this cancer manifests. Possessed, stressed by this unyielding pest. I am obsessed with myself mostly when undressed. There are not many who will protest that poetically I am blessed. The best in my world A master of my own conquest.. Jared Pickett 7/26/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 9/4/2010 1:05:00 PM

I love this Jared. You're still my favorite poet. ILY...Love Scarlett

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/20/2010 4:42:00 PM

Nothing like having lots of confidence to become a success. I liked it Jared. Thanks for the soupmail but I don't know how to post it since the contest is gone and I don't know how to put it on there. Too bad. It was good. I used your name as the Acrostic.It's called A Day to Savor if you want to look for it. Love, Joyce

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/2/2010 10:54:00 AM

liked this one Jared. Expressed how I feel at one time or another. HIT it on the head. Have a great day. GOD bless Phyl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/30/2010 5:58:00 PM

Hey Jared, have not heard much from you lately...you must be on another site more.

Samuel Brooks

Date: 7/28/2010 1:35:00 PM

Outstanding write my brotha. You really nailed this one. Made make you one of my Favorite poets.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/27/2010 9:32:00 PM

This is truly a perfect picture of u.. and its a dynamic concept of words ..well written and rhymed ..to my liking very much.. think I'll just have to make it a FAV... those wonderful lines... I am obsessed with myself mostly when undressed...kinda fits the "Sweetheart" too..haha..no wonder u recognize my poetry so easily..haha..with luv..