Life

golden rays of life where an acorn once did drop from the swallow's beak Entry in Summer Tempest contest

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2010 5:14:00 PM

great one Joe....unique perspective. Enyoyed it congratulations to you.-Robert

Date: 5/6/2010 9:26:00 AM

Very nice Haiku Joe, congratulations on your first place win...Scarlett

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/6/2010 12:24:00 AM

From one little acorn a magnificent tree. this is really so good. well done Joe....cheers Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:15:00 PM

wowie, joe, a first place in THIS One. YOu are having a banner week, my friend!! LUv, andrea ps this is just great, this amazing little haiku you did.

Date: 5/5/2010 1:30:00 PM

Beautiful use of imagery and a creative perspective. Congratulations on placing first in Raul's contest! Enjoy your BIG HONOR. Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 12:43:00 PM

Congrats Joe on your 1st place win in Raul's contest.. SUPER SOUPER... luv your blog comment on Andrea's blog too Joe .. see u proved that by entering all the contests, like I do, u begin to win and your first place is well deserved... enjoy my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/5/2010 12:24:00 PM

Joe, congratulations in winning my Summer Tempest contest...Raul

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/4/2010 7:49:00 AM

lovely, paints a picture