life

life

              releases

                       some good
 
                                 some bad
                   
                                        some very unexpected

life 
 
   is becoming

                   difficult

                            frightening

                                         but yet

                                              I want to go the last mile

                                                                         win the race

leave this earth

                     when Jesus (God)

                                   says to me

                                             "come away my love"

                                                                 "winter is over and

                                                                                     spring is come"




Song of Solomon     
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 5/19/2025 7:44:00 AM
Solomon had great songs. Love your lyric.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:49:00 PM
Yes, Solomon the wisest man to live because when he asked God for wisdom instead of riches God granted the wisdom and added riches. However, even Solomon in his humanness made some serious errors in what he did. Sara K
Date: 5/18/2025 11:31:00 PM
Beautiful, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I am glad that you found it beautiful. Sara K
Date: 5/17/2025 3:19:00 PM
Sara, this is touching, beautifully written, and incredibly tender. Running this race with patience and adoration until the finish line and seeing Him at the end, at the beginning of our eternal life with Him is certainly a beautiful and precious Light at the end of winter's darkness. You are so inspiring as I read your words today Sara, thank you! <3
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, BJ. I am so delighted that you found it inspiring. I can tell you have the faith. Sara K
Date: 5/17/2025 7:38:00 AM
Dear sara, This is such a soulful poem that flows so well and i agree with you life has so many layers to it, but we must face it all and sail through the tides high and low, until we reach a realm of eternal peace! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light always
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:44:00 PM
IE, sometimes there are things about life that we have to face that are not so easy, but I think everything we face, go through and make it to the other side makes us stronger. Sara K
Date: 5/16/2025 8:55:00 PM
Though life may be full of ups and downs, we wish to run till we successfully reach the finishing point and bag the trophy of a life of eternal bliss. Well done, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:42:00 PM
Yes, Valsa. I am sure all Christians want to complete the race and earn that prize. Sara K
Date: 5/16/2025 4:03:00 PM
incredible poem, so touching and graceful words, like a prayer, thanks poet
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:41:00 PM
Why thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 5/16/2025 2:27:00 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write and picture you have here. Love It... Great Ending... Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. I hope your weekend was a nice one. We got some rain but were so blessed that we did not get the bad storms. Sara K
Date: 5/16/2025 10:36:00 AM
- Beautiful ... it's about enjoying life even if it can be difficult sometimes :) - Wishing you a lovely weekend, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:39:00 PM
Anne-Lise, one should enjoy every minute of their life if they possibly can. Your visits always lift my spirit. Sara K
Date: 5/16/2025 8:58:00 AM
Dear Sara, you have crafted such a fantastic poem with many metaphoric layers about life and it's changing mood to death witch is the time for rest. Wish you many years ahead and plenty of happiness and health
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:38:00 PM
Lasaad, I appreciate the visit and nice review of my lines. I hope you are in good health and looking forward to the warm months ahead. Sara K
Date: 5/16/2025 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem on Life, Sara Kendrick. I always look forward to Spring. Blessings to you!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/20/2025 1:36:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for dropping by and leaving a nice review of my work. Yes, spring is a wonderful time of the year, and I mostly enjoy the season of everything coming alive. Sara K
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