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Was entered in Sonnet Poetry Contest - Option 2 in 2024

~~~"One word frees us of all the weight and pain
of life. The word is love."~~~
~~~Quote by Sophocles, Greek Poet~~~

Used: RhymeZone, How Many Syllables and PS Syllable Counter

Now: Sonnet - Old or New Poetry Contest

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The mysterious side of life pulls me, wholeheartedly fascinates, like the sea. From the mystical conception of life through the lifetime and then the afterlife. I am in complete awe how life unfolds and what life brings to contemplate, behold. Each of us is unique, but we all need love, care, attention, support to succeed. Life can be easy for some people or tough for some, but with courage could still soar. People who are truly loved acquire, gain inner strength to go through crisis, grief, pain. No matter how difficult, life goes on. The love in our heart would help us move on.

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Constance La France

Date: 5/12/2024 3:06:00 PM

Marilene, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/12/2024 11:22:00 PM

Constance, thank you for my placement and your compliment. Have a wonderful week.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2024 9:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/12/2024 11:21:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara. Blessings to you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/4/2024 12:26:00 PM

Dear Marilene, your contemplation on the enigmatic journey of life is both profound and heartfelt. Like the ebb and flow of the sea, life's mysteries captivate us, beckoning us to explore its depths. With courage and love in our hearts, we find the strength to navigate life's uncertainties and emerge stronger than before. Here's to embracing life's journey with open hearts and unwavering resilience. Blessings, Daniel.

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/5/2024 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel. Cheers to embracing life's journey. Yes, love can do so much for ourselves and loved ones and others we want to help get back up when they fall. Have a good Sunday. Blessings, Marilene

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2024 8:29:00 AM

People who are truly loved acquire, gain inner strength to go through crisis, grief, pain...I think you’re right. Love is not selfish, but thought through with wisdom and grace, can help others in their time of need.

Marilene Evans
Date: 5/4/2024 9:10:00 AM

Hello, Kim. Thank you for visiting. Yes, love is in us that could help us when we go through difficult times and could help us support someone going through the hurdles of life and eventually see the light. Have a great weekend. Blessings to you. Hugs, Marilene