Notes About The Poem

Life

Life is an amalgamation of chemicals and elements
Independently functioning to attain and maintain the whole.
From stardust and chaos, cells fashioned themselves into existence,
Evolving, propagating, and achieving higher consciousness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Hello Emile, you have me looking at life differently now my friend. My friend enjoy your long weekend my friend. /Darlene/
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June 28, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Hello Emile, Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your long weekend. /Darlene/
Pinet Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Thanks, Darlene; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Congratulations, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 6:14 AM
Thanks, Kim, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Fowler Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Empirical beauty of science in your words Emile. Congratulations my friend! :)
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Linda, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Caliri Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 9:00 PM
Congrats on 7th place in my contest out of 61 entries! Loved your scientific approach to this, exploring the beauty of the invisible (to the naked eye) world! Well done! Each line had great depth, like a slice of cheesecake.
Pinet Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 6:42 AM
Thanks, Matt. I welcome and appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend; Emile.
Ashley Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Dear Emile, your wonderful pen captures this amazing process of life arising from stardust and chaos so beautifully in your acrostic poem. Indeed, we are all made of stardust.. simple astounding! Your poetic talent and intellect sparkles in this piece. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Thanks, Susan. I welcome and appreciate your comments. You have brought a smile to my day, my friend; Emile.
Miller Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Nice one Emile, GL in the contest
Pinet Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 8:15 AM
Thanks, Terry. I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Hello Emile, Wow! I enjoyed this . My friend. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Hello Emile, I am glad you appreciate my comments. it makes my daybrighter. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
Pinet Avatar
May 3, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Thank you, Darlene! I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Achara Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Nice write!
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Thank You! I welcome and appreciate your comments.
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