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spark lit by someone flickers flares flashes flames hearts minds and bodies till --- doused by the one lit it Springing from the whole flowing through the whole fulfills fancies of wholeness --- fondly flows in the whole migratory bird taken flight from far explores unknown asylums --- flies back tired and homesick 25 March 2022

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Date: 4/3/2022 11:10:00 AM
Your "life" is another wonderful write. Love your line, "flies back tired and homesick." People do also. Have a great/blessed day and week to come.............
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Date: 3/27/2022 6:11:00 AM
You have proved yourself a master in Kimo poetry ! All your kimos are fantastic Chris !
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Date: 3/26/2022 1:31:00 PM
Sometimes wandering down many paths does work as well as slowly choosing one and learning everything from that experience. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 3/25/2022 1:24:00 PM
Kimo at it's best! I enjoyed the read! All the best^JCB
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/25/2022 9:16:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 3/25/2022 1:15:00 PM
Very nice and great alliteration in the middle one
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/25/2022 9:16:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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