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Lies

Everyone seems to lie today, their empty words are made of clay. They mold their oily words to please, to make us kneel and feel at ease. We sometimes lie because of fear, we know the lies but we adhere, and wear our lies like masks all day; and smile to keep ourselves at bay. Lies have many, many faces, but they cover all their bases. We're rabbits hiding in a hole, forgetting that we have a soul. Who can separate truth from lies? and why do we all compromise? Lies coil around our thoughts today, like serpents keeping truth at bay. Written for contest, "LIES"

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Date: 8/17/2021 1:19:00 PM
That's a really good poem, Lunita! "lies coil around our thoughts today..." I like that line especially. That's just what they do. Good rhyming, too!
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Date: 6/23/2018 4:10:00 PM
very good ,
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 7/16/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Marc.
Date: 6/11/2018 7:42:00 PM
Now that's the truth!
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 6/11/2018 8:52:00 PM
Guess we all are guilty of attempting to keep up with the rest of society Amy.
Date: 6/11/2018 6:07:00 AM
Beautifully told truth about lies..
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 6/11/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 6/10/2018 1:33:00 PM
A lovely couplet Carlos.. Penned perfectly and so true about lies.. A pleasure to read! Blessings to you!
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 6/10/2018 1:38:00 PM
You are too kind Robertina. Thanks.
Date: 6/10/2018 10:17:00 AM
It is terrible, there are those who will continuously lie and hurt others. I like your description in the last line too. :)
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 6/10/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thank you for visiting my friend.

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