Lie of the Land

truth be told can we turn the corner ~ on an infallibly bent earth By David Kavanagh

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/9/2021 6:28:00 PM

Great Monoku, David; I believe it is OK to fantasize about it; maybe future generations will discover a method to shift the Earth's axis or reverse climate change.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2021 1:04:00 AM

Climate change was indeed in the forefront of my mind when writing, but I have little faith in government promises to actually do anything that will upset lobbyists with ulterior motives and unlimited cash, cheers David

John Lawless

Date: 8/9/2021 5:06:00 PM

Perhaps the earth was once flat and then we bent it to or needs....

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2021 1:06:00 AM

I’d go a little further John, and say corrupted it to our needs, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/9/2021 5:51:00 AM

Flat earthers could surely find a way! ;), xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/9/2021 5:54:00 AM

Ah indeed Super Mo they find a way but should we follow them over the edge, cheers David