Lie Hurts

I was getting the wind but was myth As he odium me was the real truth Lone wolf I remained, solo from reality And suffered the pain of libel..!!! Conk-out he did and joined another chum The truth kept me soothe I shivered in the ail of conk-out and zest And ebbed in this dark cosmos..!!!

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Skat A

Date: 7/7/2016 1:16:00 AM

Shelly, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2014 12:55:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Shelly - I choose your first great written poem - Yes, lies hurts ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/14/2014 12:33:00 AM

A moment arrives when we must light our own torch Shelly...J.A.B.