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Lickety Split

Looking for money the easiest way - Impossibly shameless, he searched for his prey. Cleverly creeping, he’d spy a poor dolt, Kill them with kindness and gain sympathy. Embezzlement was his great specialty - Trickery too, and the talent to bolt! Yes, when he fled, he gave them a jolt. Slimy was he, being slickety-slick, Prospering from every poor soul he duped. Lickety split, he was quicker than quick. In a lurch he would leave them. How low he stooped! Then off he’d be running, fresh patsies to pick. April 13, 2018 for Deb Guzzi's Lickety-Split Acrostic Contest

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Date: 4/20/2018 4:08:00 PM
Many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! A fun read.
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:26:00 PM
Fantastic poem, Andrea, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/19/2018 9:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Andrea. Great play on words. Well done.
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Date: 4/19/2018 7:04:00 PM
Very nice, Dear Friend - this took work and I enjoyed it thoroughly! Blessings Buddy! (You get thirteen comments I get one ... and I thank everyone for comments. Don't get it, lol). :-) <3
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Date: 4/19/2018 7:04:00 PM
Such a nice twist on the words. Very original topic used XXXOOO Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2018 3:09:00 AM
Slickety-slick. Nice one. Good luck in the contest. I know one of that kind. His name is Mervyn, but we called him Merkin. Wishes to you, Kai
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Date: 4/14/2018 11:56:00 AM
FIRST - I miss you much & hope to write you long soon. So much happening. SECOND - your write is my definition of lickety split, as handled with Andrea' cleverness and talent. I slammed the last one into the contest last night, kept it mini-worded per her example just to get something in. Then I entered the last poem in Shadow's contest (something old). This is truly creative. I suspect you enjoy the challenge of Acrostics just as I do. Love and missings ... CayCay
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Date: 4/14/2018 7:15:00 AM
Excellent, Andrea! Oh what a charming fella! Run! ;)
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Date: 4/14/2018 5:27:00 AM
Andrea...Your creative concepts chill my goose bumps!
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Date: 4/13/2018 9:47:00 PM
Excellent, Andrea--chillingly descriptive. Janice
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Date: 4/13/2018 6:17:00 PM
It begs to wonder if this slimy creature could be Satan himself. Well done, Andrea! Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/13/2018 4:16:00 PM
Captivating and Capturing, Andrea!
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Date: 4/13/2018 2:52:00 PM
Erase
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Date: 4/13/2018 7:34:00 AM
You captured the character well..I can see him in his act..running away shamelessly..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 4/13/2018 3:32:00 AM
Well done; this didn't have anything to do with politics did it?
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Date: 4/13/2018 1:55:00 AM
Great acrostic Andrea, sadly slimebags like this do exist. Good luck. Tom.
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