Lickety Split

Looking for money the easiest way -
Impossibly shameless, he searched for his prey.
Cleverly creeping, he’d spy a poor dolt,
Kill them with kindness and gain sympathy.
Embezzlement was his great specialty -
Trickery too, and the talent to bolt!
Yes, when he fled, he gave them a jolt.

Slimy was he, being slickety-slick,
Prospering from every poor soul he duped.
Lickety split, he was quicker than quick.
In a lurch he would leave them. How low he stooped!
Then off he’d be running, fresh patsies to pick.


April 13, 2018 for Deb Guzzi's Lickety-Split Acrostic Contest
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Allison Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Congratulations on your win! A fun read.
Roper Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Fantastic poem, Andrea, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Andrea. Great play on words. Well done.
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Such a nice twist on the words. Very original topic used XXXOOO Congrad's Light & Love
Barden Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Very nice, Dear Friend - this took work and I enjoyed it thoroughly! Blessings Buddy! (You get thirteen comments I get one ... and I thank everyone for comments. Don't get it, lol). :-) <3
Neumann Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:09 AM
Slickety-slick. Nice one. Good luck in the contest. I know one of that kind. His name is Mervyn, but we called him Merkin. Wishes to you, Kai
Godwin Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 11:56 AM
FIRST - I miss you much & hope to write you long soon. So much happening. SECOND - your write is my definition of lickety split, as handled with Andrea' cleverness and talent. I slammed the last one into the contest last night, kept it mini-worded per her example just to get something in. Then I entered the last poem in Shadow's contest (something old). This is truly creative. I suspect you enjoy the challenge of Acrostics just as I do. Love and missings ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Excellent, Andrea! Oh what a charming fella! Run! ;)
Melugin Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 5:27 AM
Andrea...Your creative concepts chill my goose bumps!
Canerdy Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:47 PM
Excellent, Andrea--chillingly descriptive. Janice
Devonshire Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 6:17 PM
It begs to wonder if this slimy creature could be Satan himself. Well done, Andrea! Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Sergi Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Captivating and Capturing, Andrea!
Warlov Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Erase
Pandit Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:34 AM
You captured the character well..I can see him in his act..running away shamelessly..best for a win, Andrea.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:32 AM
Well done; this didn't have anything to do with politics did it?
Cunningham Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Great acrostic Andrea, sadly slimebags like this do exist. Good luck. Tom.
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