Lickety Split

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Lackadaisical
Itinerary
Certainly
Keeps
Elderly
Tentatively
Young

Seniors
Particularly
Lack
Individual
Training


 April 11, 2018 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/16/2018 9:48:00 AM
Much expressed in few lines - well done!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/16/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you! Appreciate you reading and commenting. :)
Date: 4/14/2018 4:23:00 PM
You sure managed to write a fast poem here, Susan! I believe it's what the sponsor is after, though if I were you I'd erase the word 'senior' from the title since an Acrostic's title has to match the initial letters of the acrostic itself. ~ Regards // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/14/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Paul. I did not know that. Appreciate your help!
Date: 4/14/2018 1:36:00 PM
Good message and it flows nicely.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/14/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thanks Juliet. Appreciate your input.
Date: 4/14/2018 12:56:00 PM
Nicely done, Susan, I have to ask at what age does one become labeled as a senior...I might have to take exception with this, haha. John
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/14/2018 4:39:00 PM
Lol... it's all a state of mind I'm told.
Date: 4/14/2018 11:17:00 AM
Good job, Susan. I've done only one word-per-line acrostic, but it's only five words long! Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/14/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thx!
Date: 4/12/2018 7:41:00 PM
hahaha. I was gonna go the single word route per line but didn't. You did this very well!!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/12/2018 10:33:00 PM
:) Thank you!! I like acrostics.
Date: 4/11/2018 9:11:00 PM
A fun acrostic, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/11/2018 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 4/11/2018 5:10:00 PM
this reads so beautifully Susan so few words say so much!!!! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/11/2018 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan!