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Lickety Split

Lackadaisical
Itinerary
Certainly
Keeps
Elderly
Tentatively
Young

Seniors
Particularly
Lack
Individual
Training


 April 11, 2018

Copyright © Susan Gentry | Year Posted 2018

ageenduranceidentitypeopleretirementacrostic

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Michelle Faulkner

April 16, 2018 at 9:48 AM

Much expressed in few lines - well done!

April 16, 2018 at 1:50 PM

Thank you! Appreciate you reading and commenting. :)

April 14, 2018 at 4:23 PM

You sure managed to write a fast poem here, Susan! I believe it's what the sponsor is after, though if I were you I'd erase the word 'senior' from the title since an Acrostic's title has to match the initial letters of the acrostic itself. ~ Regards // paul

April 14, 2018 at 4:36 PM

Thank you Paul. I did not know that. Appreciate your help!

April 14, 2018 at 1:36 PM

Good message and it flows nicely.

April 14, 2018 at 4:40 PM

Thanks Juliet. Appreciate your input.

April 14, 2018 at 12:56 PM

Nicely done, Susan, I have to ask at what age does one become labeled as a senior...I might have to take exception with this, haha. John

April 14, 2018 at 4:39 PM

Lol... it's all a state of mind I'm told.

April 14, 2018 at 11:17 AM

Good job, Susan. I've done only one word-per-line acrostic, but it's only five words long! Janice

April 14, 2018 at 4:37 PM

Thx!

Andrea Dietrich

April 12, 2018 at 7:41 PM

hahaha. I was gonna go the single word route per line but didn't. You did this very well!!!

April 12, 2018 at 10:33 PM

:) Thank you!! I like acrostics.

April 11, 2018 at 9:11 PM

A fun acrostic, Susan.

April 11, 2018 at 9:54 PM

Thank you Line.

April 11, 2018 at 5:10 PM

this reads so beautifully Susan so few words say so much!!!! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

April 11, 2018 at 9:54 PM

Thanks Jan!

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