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Liberty Pounce

Rabbit-Hat free-quest Rodent-claws' capitulate Re-delusion's collar _____ NOTES: My - not quite - "Haiku". A personal beloved form so "chalk-it-up" to cultural religions' "Im-perfect Salutations" & "B.C." ~ 'Before Coffee'. __ I dream of Japan nix-language nirvana like Hot Coffee Refresh!

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/13/2025 2:35:00 AM

Oh, don't talk to me during BC morning moments, it is too painful to engage, especially if questions are involved. Does imperfect refer to the Rabbit-Rodent or Japan-Dream or both? Both seem to be off by just one syllable, but I realized I'm not sure how many syllables are in language, now I must look that up. Why did you give me homework? I enjoyed my time on this page. CayCay

Robert Warlov
Date: 5/13/2025 5:22:00 AM

If you think of haiku as a kind of prayer- not to a "Personal God" but as recognition of the Order and Grace revealed in and through everyday natural experiences, that ( 5/7/5 ) "Incoherence" to the Christian Mind-Set is insurmountable. My use of it to service "Western" political ends is then, at least, "Heretical" but not intended to be disrespectful.