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Libertine Libidos Form With Alliteration

......Like lemons Love lingers longingly. Laughter lights lips lapping Loco lemon lollipops lodging < liquid> lust. Lofting Ludicrous licentiousness. Licking languid limbs.~ ~lap~ Libertine libidos lose liberty laughing life long ~loves~ lean lemony lips Lionhearts !litmus lovers! LIVE!

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/9/2013 4:40:00 PM

I love this lustful scene you created here.. Big Congratulations.~A.O

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/6/2013 5:51:00 PM

Lovely initiative.Nice presentation..Good job...Congrats on your superb win....Kudos to you,great poetess....Light and Love..

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/5/2013 8:32:00 PM

Love love love.........................it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2013 8:02:00 PM

Debbie, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA

Gloria Benton

Date: 9/17/2010 9:30:00 AM

Hi: Deborah Guzzi Congrats on your poetry win in Linda Marie's contest Luscious Love Lingers", nice poem. Love and appreciate you very much. Thank you for your help too. May God richly bless you. Gloria

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2010 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 7:52:00 PM

lalalalalalala. oooohlalalala. Congrats,Deb!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/8/2010 6:15:00 PM

Luscious!!!!! Congratulations to a LLLLLLOVELY LADY !! :)

David Smalling

Date: 9/8/2010 12:35:00 PM

What erotic els, the picture almost completed its seductive intent too. Bravo

Constance La France

Date: 9/7/2010 9:34:00 PM

Congratulations Debs on 2nd place in Linda's contest with this great write.. love constance

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2010 7:31:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your big win in my LLL Alliteration contest... wonderful entry ... with luv.. enjoy...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2010 7:46:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting my contest Debbie.. good luck with luv..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/22/2010 3:50:00 PM

Love the lusciousness of lemon lollipops and this poem. BIG SMILES, Dane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 3:39:00 PM

Deb, I am so confused by Linda's contest. Isn't it supposed to be at least 20 lines?? Maybe I am misunderstanding that. This seems to be for LInda's contest. Also, I read the definition of alliteration and it looks like we can change sounds every line if we want. Did I get that right?? HELP.. I sure do not know what I am gonna do for her contest when I can't even get the rules straight. haha. THis one is very fun to read. LOve it. Andrea

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/22/2010 3:45:00 AM

What a lovely Alliteration with words speaking their colors and flavors. Great write and lovely use of imagery. And thank you for honoring my poem Just Keep Always Your Hopes Alive. Love and best wishes always........Ravindra......Deborah Guzzi.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2010 8:07:00 PM

A complete alliteration with wonderful use of images, Debbie and thanks for your comments on my poems

Skat A

Date: 8/21/2010 7:09:00 PM

wow! WOW! Deborah, I am glad I stoped to read your wonderful poem.:-) A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat