Libertine Libidos Form With Alliteration

......Like lemons
Love lingers longingly.
Laughter lights lips lapping
Loco lemon lollipops
       lodging
           < liquid>
               lust.
            Lofting
	Ludicrous licentiousness.
Licking 
     languid limbs.~ ~lap~
	Libertine libidos
lose liberty laughing
     life long
         ~loves~
lean lemony lips
 
               Lionhearts
                    !litmus lovers!
                         LIVE!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Oyewole Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 4:40 PM
I love this lustful scene you created here.. Big Congratulations.~A.O
Arowolo Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Lovely initiative.Nice presentation..Good job...Congrats on your superb win....Kudos to you,great poetess....Light and Love..
Richards Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Love love love.........................it!
A   Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Debbie, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA
Benton Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Hi: Deborah Guzzi Congrats on your poetry win in Linda Marie's contest Luscious Love Lingers", nice poem. Love and appreciate you very much. Thank you for your help too. May God richly bless you. Gloria
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 7:52 PM
lalalalalalala. oooohlalalala. Congrats,Deb!!
Richards Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Luscious!!!!! Congratulations to a LLLLLLOVELY LADY !! :)
Smalling Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 12:35 PM
What erotic els, the picture almost completed its seductive intent too. Bravo
La France Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 9:34 PM
Congratulations Debs on 2nd place in Linda's contest with this great write.. love constance
Sweetheart Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in my LLL Alliteration contest... wonderful entry ... with luv.. enjoy...
Sweetheart Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 7:46 PM
thankxxx for supporting my contest Debbie.. good luck with luv..
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:50 PM
Love the lusciousness of lemon lollipops and this poem. BIG SMILES, Dane
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Deb, I am so confused by Linda's contest. Isn't it supposed to be at least 20 lines?? Maybe I am misunderstanding that. This seems to be for LInda's contest. Also, I read the definition of alliteration and it looks like we can change sounds every line if we want. Did I get that right?? HELP.. I sure do not know what I am gonna do for her contest when I can't even get the rules straight. haha. THis one is very fun to read. LOve it. Andrea
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August 22, 2010 at 3:45 AM
What a lovely Alliteration with words speaking their colors and flavors. Great write and lovely use of imagery. And thank you for honoring my poem Just Keep Always Your Hopes Alive. Love and best wishes always........Ravindra......Deborah Guzzi.
Mehta Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 8:07 PM
A complete alliteration with wonderful use of images, Debbie and thanks for your comments on my poems
A  Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:09 PM
wow! WOW! Deborah, I am glad I stoped to read your wonderful poem.:-) A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat
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