Get Your Premium Membership

Liberate Me

Liberate me my love Show me the right way to love thee Sing to me my love Show me the right way to cherish thee Serenade me my love Show me how to care for thee I have regret of my past , needing to be needed My hopes that you'd be that one are true Although your feeling's I've mistreated I have spent much time relying on your ways To care for me throughout my life's meaningless days Liberate me my love Let your light overwhelm the dark Liberate my heart to love.... again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/17/2013 10:51:00 AM
a poem of love and light, i enjoyed the free feeling while reading and discovering the passion that sinks in your poem, hope your enjoyed your weekend. take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2013 12:07:00 PM
Me thinks thou hast a good write. Just remove the apostrophe from "feeling's" in your ninth line. Apostrophes are only used when a genitive or possessive case is present.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2013 10:25:00 AM
Nice poem.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things