Kim Rodrigues Poet Tetractys

Notes About The Poem

Levity of Return

kids
impressed,
wave from trees.
father, mother,
siblings, pet - on high. the neighbors salute.
while, in a red bow, girl’s waiting, breathless.
does he want her…?
how heavy
is his
bag?

2/6/2021
Double Tetractys 7
Sponsor:Eve Roper
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Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2021 at 9:44 AM Congratulations on your win. A great write about this family picture. I also did this picture in a different way. Many interpretations to this one picture. Enjoy your day/win with blessings................... Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2021 at 12:48 PM Thank you! Blessings to you, Paula!

Linda Alice Fowler March 1, 2021 at 8:30 AM Love this Kim - how heavy is his bag - terrific! Congratulations on the win! Linda Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2021 at 12:41 PM Glad you liked that line! Thank you, Linda!

Alexis Y. March 1, 2021 at 7:33 AM Hi Kim, What a good interpretation of the photo. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2021 at 12:41 PM Have a great day! Thank you!

Unseeking Seeker March 1, 2021 at 1:06 AM Wow! I really enjoyed the concluding lines! Congrats Kim! Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2021 at 3:06 AM Thank you so much! :)

Eve Roper February 28, 2021 at 11:23 PM Thank you for creating and entering my contest, Kim, great imagery. Do visit my Double Tetractys 7 blog. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2021 at 3:06 AM Thank you, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2021 at 1:51 PM Great imagination for what is going on with the girl in red bow!!! Kim Rodrigues February 9, 2021 at 2:32 PM Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar February 7, 2021 at 2:06 AM Great description of the photo chosen. Best for a win. ~~ Kim Rodrigues February 7, 2021 at 4:23 AM Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~