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Levity of Return

kids
impressed,
wave from trees.
father, mother,
siblings, pet - on high. the neighbors salute.
while, in a red bow, girl’s waiting, breathless.
does he want her…?
how heavy
is his
bag?

2/6/2021
Double Tetractys 7
Sponsor:Eve Roper
HMS
Photo #3

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/1/2021 9:44:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A great write about this family picture. I also did this picture in a different way. Many interpretations to this one picture. Enjoy your day/win with blessings................... Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2021 12:48:00 PM Thank you! Blessings to you, Paula!

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/1/2021 8:30:00 AM Love this Kim - how heavy is his bag - terrific! Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2021 12:41:00 PM Glad you liked that line! Thank you, Linda!

Alexis Y. Date: 3/1/2021 7:33:00 AM Hi Kim, What a good interpretation of the photo. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2021 12:41:00 PM Have a great day! Thank you!

Unseeking Seeker Date: 3/1/2021 1:06:00 AM Wow! I really enjoyed the concluding lines! Congrats Kim! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2021 3:06:00 AM Thank you so much! :)

Eve Roper Date: 2/28/2021 11:23:00 PM Thank you for creating and entering my contest, Kim, great imagery. Do visit my Double Tetractys 7 blog. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2021 3:06:00 AM Thank you, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/9/2021 1:51:00 PM Great imagination for what is going on with the girl in red bow!!! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/9/2021 2:32:00 PM Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/7/2021 2:06:00 AM Great description of the photo chosen. Best for a win. ~~ Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/7/2021 4:23:00 AM Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~