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Levity of Return

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kids impressed, wave from trees. father, mother, siblings, pet - on high. the neighbors salute. while, in a red bow, girl’s waiting, breathless. does he want her…? how heavy is his bag? 2/6/2021 Double Tetractys 7 Sponsor:Eve Roper HMS Photo #3

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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/1/2021 9:44:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. A great write about this family picture. I also did this picture in a different way. Many interpretations to this one picture. Enjoy your day/win with blessings...................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2021 12:48:00 PM
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Thank you! Blessings to you, Paula!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/1/2021 8:30:00 AM
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Love this Kim - how heavy is his bag - terrific! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2021 12:41:00 PM
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Glad you liked that line! Thank you, Linda!
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/1/2021 7:33:00 AM
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Hi Kim, What a good interpretation of the photo. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2021 12:41:00 PM
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Have a great day! Thank you!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/1/2021 1:06:00 AM
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Wow! I really enjoyed the concluding lines! Congrats Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2021 3:06:00 AM
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Thank you so much! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/28/2021 11:23:00 PM
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Thank you for creating and entering my contest, Kim, great imagery. Do visit my Double Tetractys 7 blog. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2021 3:06:00 AM
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Thank you, Eve!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/9/2021 1:51:00 PM
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Great imagination for what is going on with the girl in red bow!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2021 2:32:00 PM
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Thank you :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/7/2021 2:06:00 AM
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Great description of the photo chosen. Best for a win. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 4:23:00 AM
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Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~

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