Notes About The Poem

Letting out steam

I resent having to be patient when 
that’s not a virtue I much value
Why can’t I enjoy being in love
oh yeah, because you’re not ready to 
be that guy I long to please.

I resent that in the love department
part of you is a clumsy teenager
and you expect me to teach you
what you’ve never bothered learning.
I resent that you have trouble understanding
when all I do is clarify expectations
and I leave the rest to you.

I’m buying into the bull and promises
that you do want this to work ~
Bull because from this angle I see
a hot air balloon that is having 
a hard time getting off the ground.



Lineku: 3 stanzas of 5-7-5 lines each line having 5 or 7 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 3:13 PM
the imagery of the hot air balloon is perfect. Well done! Faving
Gauthier Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 5:53 AM
What a surprise ~ thank you !
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