Letting Her Down Easy

He let her down easy
He didn’t want to hurt her
Gently, gently he drew away
A little more everyday
He was a gentleman
And would never make
Her little heart pay
For his BIG mistake...

So he let her down easy
Easy…easy…easy….
Slowly…slowly…he’d recede
Till he’d fade away
Gently…gently…she’d never know
The emotional investment too high
More than he bargained for
Not an easy ride
He let her down easy…

Little did he know
That while he was perfecting the show
Someone saw her beauty
And was laying her down gently
Gently…gently
Nice and slow
Laying her down gently...tilting her head
Closing his lips over her mouth
Investment of all his time
And heart besides….
Laying her down gently
A real gentleman
Making her feel 
His words were real
Laying her down real slow
Making love to her
Gently...gently….
Nice and S L O W
Laying her down
Loving the sound
Listening to her moan
Laying her down..... 
G E N T L Y.....

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:20 AM
I have made changes to my Ice King Poem. I understand what you are saying although in spirit I do not feel dark merely it is the subject matter that speaks to me in the way that I have expressed it. Do not be concearned Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:40 AM
I read the poem...I love the changes. It flows so much better now.... :) No, I'm not worried, Richard...Your work is still great....just.....different! Thanks for explaining. Do take care!
Chircop Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 5:47 AM
This goes deep..Whilst someone is cutting of ribbons gently with her not to hurt her feelings..Someone else is loving her gently and making up for his fading away..Do i get it?Very deep thoughts penned..sweet lady
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:41 AM
YES....exactly! You have summed it all very well, beautiful Charmain! :) Hugs!
Sanders Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 4:11 AM
Wow!!!! I love the soft flow of this poem very good I love this poet.
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:37 AM
:) Thank you, Sean. Glad you enjoyed this write.
Andresen Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:51 AM
- One man with emotion and style, he knows how .... - Soft and good poem, Eileen! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:54 AM
:) Thanks, Anne Lise....:) Hugs!!!!
Ferry Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 12:57 AM
Hello Eileen...Nice...Thanks for all your comments on my writes..Rick
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:10 AM
Thanks for your visit here! :)
Sivey Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:39 PM
You have written an awesome and sentimental write here my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece this poem really is, Great Work!!
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:10 AM
Thanks, Russell. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for the visit....
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 8:12 PM
This is so beautiful and sad and sensitive and and and.............
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:42 AM
For a poet of your caliber, Richard....surely words are no barrier! :) Lovely post...thanks ever so much!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 8:16 AM
And beyond my ability to describe how fantastic your writing is.
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:11 AM
Wish I knew those ands....thanks!
Seal Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Where are you getting your inspiration from my little desert Orchid lol. People can always change their minds you know. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:02 PM
It's a woman's prerogative to change her mind. Some stereotypes are good! Depends what you are changing your mind about, Mr. Seal....A person can't really change his/her mind on issues of honor, when his/her word has been given about something...well, it happens but...not cool...Holiday plans can change with the shifting positions of the sun...no galactic consequences....Glad the same things inspire you...I...GUESS! ;)
Seal Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Same I guess. People can change their minds about anything and often do. Like someone who is going on holiday then doesn't sort of thing :):)
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:09 AM
LIFE...People....experiences....you? What inspires you, Mr Seal? People can change their minds about.....what? You lost me there....care to explain?
Tacito Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 4:16 PM
This was a shy & subtle slow dance, with the sudden dip in the end. Diggin' this.
Manassian Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 2:07 AM
Ah....nothing quiet like a slow dance! :) Dip and Digging...love the way you express yourself, Drake! :)
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