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Letting Go and Walking Away

There's nothing left, no reason to stay.
              I know it's time to walk away
           Never again will you make me cry,
     I 've found the courage to tell you goodbye.

        But first there's something I must do,
      collect the last memories of me and you.
             I need to find an empty box,
         one I can seal with tape and locks.

        I need to put away so many things,
         pictures, cards, my wedding rings.
      valued keepsakes, I used to treasure,
    the sight of them brings me no pleasure.

     I should just throw this stuff in the trash
        watch it burn until its turned to ash.
         But in my mind there'd still remain,
    those bits and pieces that caused me pain.  

           In the box is all that's left of us
    of a marriage covered in cobwebs and dust.
           I'm letting go and walking away,
          but I've decided the box will stay.

   I've no need of reminders of what we once had,
   those insignificant remnants of a life we shared.
            Put it in bed where I used to lay.
 It's heartless like you. That's why I'm walking away.

               *   *   *   *   *   *   *   *

"...and in the end, letting go was a lot like falling in love. 
I had to learn to say goodbye to the one who gave me 
the courage to say hello."
                  r. m. drake
                                                                   
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December 14th 2015
Walking Away Contest
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Williams Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Simply fantastic, Lin. Congrats on your 1st place win.
Lane Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Thank you very much, Scott.
Haight Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Lovely poem, Lin. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Sandra...I'm hugging you back ;)
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Lin, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Lane Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:11 AM
thanks
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 1:13 AM
You walked away with this well deserved top spot Lin :-) congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Love your comment, Jan... thanks!
Gentry Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Definitely a winner. Congratulations! It flowed, easy to read, very tender yet determined. A 7.
Lane Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Thank you very much, Susan.
Lindley Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Congrats my friend on your great win! Well deserved placement and a very lovely poem...
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Another jumped comment. Sorry, Robert Thank you very much for the visit and the comment.;)
Kimathi Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Hi Lin. Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-) It is a great verse! ;-)
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, Teddy.
Lawless Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Congrats on the top spot Lin, much deserved.
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Hi, John. Many thanks for your nice comment.
Hamilton Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Congrats Lin a wonderful write, well deserved win.
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Thank you Soooo very much, John. ;)
Negron Flores Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Lin.
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Your congratulations are always appreciated, Nayda.
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 10:44 AM
I love the write. Congratulations on your wonderful win, Lin! Hugs Eve
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Love your hugs, Eve. Thank you ever so much.
Tor Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 10:18 AM
Heartfelt Lin Congratulations on your 1st place win.
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Thank you very much, Michael
Babbit Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Congrats Lin, well written and well deserved recogntion. DMB
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Thank you, DMB. I appreciate your nice comments.
Scars Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Perfectly written dear Lin...good luck in the contest! You will do very well with this flow and imagery!! -luloo
Lane Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Thank you, Luloo. Such nice comments...hugs
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