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There's nothing left, no reason to stay. I know it's time to walk away Never again will you make me cry, I 've found the courage to tell you goodbye. But first there's something I must do, collect the last memories of me and you. I need to find an empty box, one I can seal with tape and locks. I need to put away so many things, pictures, cards, my wedding rings. valued keepsakes, I used to treasure, the sight of them brings me no pleasure. I should just throw this stuff in the trash watch it burn until its turned to ash. But in my mind there'd still remain, those bits and pieces that caused me pain. In the box is all that's left of us of a marriage covered in cobwebs and dust. I'm letting go and walking away, but I've decided the box will stay. I've no need of reminders of what we once had, those insignificant remnants of a life we shared. Put it in bed where I used to lay. It's heartless like you. That's why I'm walking away. * * * * * * * * "...and in the end, letting go was a lot like falling in love. I had to learn to say goodbye to the one who gave me the courage to say hello." r. m. drake ______________ December 14th 2015 Walking Away Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 12/19/2015 6:58:00 AM
Simply fantastic, Lin. Congrats on your 1st place win.
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Date: 12/20/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Scott.
Date: 12/17/2015 9:02:00 PM
Lovely poem, Lin. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/20/2015 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra...I'm hugging you back ;)
Date: 12/17/2015 3:19:00 PM
Lin, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/20/2015 8:11:00 AM
thanks
Date: 12/17/2015 1:13:00 AM
You walked away with this well deserved top spot Lin :-) congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2015 1:25:00 AM
Love your comment, Jan... thanks!
Date: 12/16/2015 9:59:00 PM
Definitely a winner. Congratulations! It flowed, easy to read, very tender yet determined. A 7.
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Date: 12/17/2015 1:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan.
Date: 12/16/2015 5:28:00 PM
Congrats my friend on your great win! Well deserved placement and a very lovely poem...
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Date: 12/16/2015 5:31:00 PM
Another jumped comment. Sorry, Robert Thank you very much for the visit and the comment.;)
Date: 12/16/2015 5:13:00 PM
Hi Lin. Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-) It is a great verse! ;-)
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Date: 12/16/2015 5:31:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy.
Date: 12/16/2015 4:03:00 PM
Congrats on the top spot Lin, much deserved.
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:21:00 PM
Hi, John. Many thanks for your nice comment.
Date: 12/16/2015 3:10:00 PM
Congrats Lin a wonderful write, well deserved win.
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Soooo very much, John. ;)
Date: 12/16/2015 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Lin.
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:20:00 PM
Your congratulations are always appreciated, Nayda.
Date: 12/16/2015 10:44:00 AM
I love the write. Congratulations on your wonderful win, Lin! Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:19:00 PM
Love your hugs, Eve. Thank you ever so much.
Date: 12/16/2015 10:18:00 AM
Heartfelt Lin Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 12/16/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Michael
Date: 12/16/2015 10:04:00 AM
Congrats Lin, well written and well deserved recogntion. DMB
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Date: 12/16/2015 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, DMB. I appreciate your nice comments.
Date: 12/15/2015 9:47:00 AM
Perfectly written dear Lin...good luck in the contest! You will do very well with this flow and imagery!! -luloo
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Date: 12/15/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thank you, Luloo. Such nice comments...hugs

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