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Letting Go

One time, I sat on a rock in a remote place; far away from civilization, to reflect on many things in my life. My girlfriend was about to leave overseas, to study architecture; my grandmother was about to sigh her last; I wasn't happy with my new home - people's houses seemed to be too apart to be called a community. I had to be closer to my new job, and farther away from narrow streets, traffic, noisy vendors..... A tree disrupted my laments, when I heard and saw birds returning to their nests. The tree, I thought, wasn't bothered whether the birds would return or not; build their nests on its branches or not. It was still and silent. I admired the tree; I decided not to worry about my girlfriend's path, for we truly loved each other; I decided to accept life and death was part of life; I resolved to adapt to my new home, life and state. I decided to let go. For Contest: Something Seemingly Insignificant and Unexpected Changed My Life Date of Entry: 6/18/2016

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Date: 6/18/2016 1:49:00 PM
It sounds like your epiphany graced your life with a blessing Teddy. I enjoyed your poem. Cheers, Connie ; )
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2016 11:59:00 AM
Yes, it did... Thanks for enjoying my piece, Connie!! *^_^*
Date: 6/18/2016 5:45:00 AM
The productive identification with the tree along with this poem in consequence is beautiful ... enjoyed the whole perspective ...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/18/2016 7:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my piece, Probir!! ;-)

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