Letting Go

One time,
I sat on a rock in a remote place;
far away from civilization,
to reflect on many things in my life.

My girlfriend was about to leave overseas,
to study architecture;
my grandmother was about to sigh her last;
I wasn't happy with my new home - people's
houses seemed to be too apart to be called
a community. I had to be closer to my new job,
and farther away from narrow streets, traffic,
noisy vendors.....

A tree disrupted my laments,
when I heard and saw birds returning to their nests.
The tree, I thought, wasn't bothered whether
the birds would return or not; build their nests
on its branches or not.

It was still and silent.

I admired the tree;
I decided not to worry about my girlfriend's path,
for we truly loved each other;
I decided to accept life and death was part
of life;
I resolved to adapt to my new home, life and state.
I decided to let go.


For Contest: Something Seemingly Insignificant and Unexpected Changed My Life

Date of Entry: 6/18/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 1:49 PM
It sounds like your epiphany graced your life with a blessing Teddy. I enjoyed your poem. Cheers, Connie ; )
Kimathi Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Yes, it did... Thanks for enjoying my piece, Connie!! *^_^*
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 5:45 AM
The productive identification with the tree along with this poem in consequence is beautiful ... enjoyed the whole perspective ...
Kimathi Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my piece, Probir!! ;-)
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