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Letting Go

i never imagined love could be that way.. it can make you happy or gay... happiness.. this what im feeling.. when someone made an offering.. of a love that has no ending.. i am a woman.. who deserves a patient gentleman.. who wants and needs love.. that will surely stand the test of time.. so i accepted.. the love that has been offered.. i, full of hopes and dreams.. giving all my love without hesitation.. as days passed by.. something happened i can feel.. this guy that made me feel.. my dream love can be real.. walked away with his heel.. sadness.. engulfed my whole being... when all of a sudden he is leaving.. thus, tearing breaking my heart bleeding.. people surrounding me observed.. maybe you are not the man i deserved.. they said: "don't be bothered" for a better man and love will come after.. so, i started to think.. of the times we spend together.. i decided: what should still be remembered.. to a love which isn't meant forever.. i gathered up the sworned pieces.. of what still left in traces... my strengths; potentials and dreams.. my goals; family and friends.. now, i am recovering.. Ever determined to keep ongoing.. Continuously praying for God's guidance and blessing.. Thinking life's treasures will still be coming..

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Date: 2/3/2016 10:33:00 AM
Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7
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Date: 10/13/2014 4:18:00 PM
Sometimes we have to let go, but that doesn't mean forever. I can feel your heart beating as you write these poems Olive, James :)
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:23:00 PM
Let your heart shine true, beyond the pain. Someone real will value that. Nicely done!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/22/2014 5:17:00 PM
:) i hope so someday.. :) in God's perfect time.. :) thanks for dropping by..

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