Letting Go

aspiration is seem to have. this more than the meanig of tis content. thank you for teaching others thru this. freedom is longed to reveal.

Aye, the power is full in your words.

Very nice, Kristin. Congratulatins on your placement in Brian's contest. Lovingly, Dane

Good for you..congrats on your win. BG

Kristin, I just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Awesome write here Kristin. Says a whole lot about recovery ... smile ... thanks for being at the Soup and congratulations on your win in the contest!!

You would have placed with either! Warmest congrats Kristin on a well deserved win! Love, Shar

A wonderful sequence, so moving and touches the heart, dear Kristin! Congratulations again my friend!!! Love, Carrie

Congrats on your success in my contest Kristin.Rgds Brian.My latest contest Indelible Impressions is now open

What an uplifting poem. I like how the narrator changes for the better as the poem evolves. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for taking time to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Letting go is a thing of a lot of strength....I admire that. How painful, and yet purifying....such a message, a light. Love, Sara:)

Thank you for supporting my contest Kristin.Rgds Brian

Very inspiration touch Kristin! Wonderfully done! Love Laura :)

That's it! You have uplifted the message of hope with your finger tips touching God's creation. You have articulated the essence of "Pentecostal Praise." I'm staying out of this one. LOL!!! Awesome job! ~Joseph

Oh this is lovely! Good luck in that contest! I love that you're a number wiz, I'm not really. I'd love to chat more :)

Dang it girl.....you had me with the first one...and now I'm looking at this one...and I'm throwing up my hands and saying "how would Moses choose??'..... devide them into two ?? Nope...guess that's not a solution!! HELP...I DON'T KNOW!! Love them both!

Hi Kristin Very touching and thought provoking. Gives the feeling of purpose along with the renewed hope. I'm with Sharon, they're both so good! Go with your gut instinct hun! Winner either way.Love Light Truth Patricia

Wonderful writing...love the idea that is in the piece..will read next one.

Then again...this is so powerful! And talk about imagery - and so much more! Oh crap, sorry I am not sure which to choose! Your fault for being such an amazing poetess! Love, Shar

This is sure to win, Kristin, oh dweller in Xanadu, oh 'Through the Looking Glass" Alice. Am I poetic, or WHAT? You be de one! Love, daver

This one is expressing a visual need for Christ's intervention, the other while very original and probably a second place winner, says just a little less with less visuals. In my opinion, I'd go with this one-AA