Letters Lost At War 2

hey momma hows things still sucks here  Eddy and Franky are both dead 
Im more scared than ever momma I just signed up to go to school  I never wanted to have to kill a man and now Ive killed again and again  Im to scared to count them I hate myself but it was them or me  gosh momma I just wanna come home were back out in the dark again all night all night in the dark momma you know how much I hate the dark wish I was home to scary here
                       gotta go bye momma
Im back momma sure do miss you they shot sarge right between the eyes two days ago  he never liked me said I was a sissy we finally got a new one  hope he keeps us alive  think he likes me here you never know who likes you till its to late  if they take a bullet for you they liked you  if they don't  its to late momma its to late tonights our last night out for backup  gotta move out bye





                                                             to be read in order 1-4

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/11/2019 1:07:00 AM
I really like the flow in this! It's like he's whispering into his phone while the bullets are flying. Makes me feel I am THERE. Wonderful! Thank You!
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