Letter To An Old Friend

Dear S.,

I was in the market yesterday
digging through a tray of grapes
trying to find the freshest bag,
but most seemed half-decayed.
I was just about to leave
(feeling mighty peeved),
but then - you won't believe!
Carole King came on the radio
and the world began to move real slow.
Even the fruit held its breath
(half-rotten and close to death).
She sang about the earth moving
and the sky tumbling,
and it made me think of you.
I thought of that summer -
the one before our senior year
when your dad taught us how to drive
(and got annoyed and made me cry).
Remember that?
We washed his car with soap and tears,
sipping on bottles of cold root beer.
Out of tune, we'd dance and sing
along to songs by Carole King.
Well, I want you to know - 
You made my day,
even though you're far away.  
And, you know, Carole said it best:
I feel my heart start to trembling
whenever you're around.
I miss that. 
And I miss you.

Love,
Me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Timperley Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Hi Me, love this, sometimes it only takes a word or an aroma to wake the past with a blast. God Bless. D. ps, at the park gates now so i'll go for a walk down Lovely Lane until I get back to you again. D.
Roberts Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 6:43 AM
love this, congrats on your win in the contest Heather
Oyewole Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 2:27 AM
Congrats on your win Heather. Beautifully penned! AO
May Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 3:50 PM
this is beautiful.....really captures what friendship is....congrats on your win
A   Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 11:22 AM
Good after noon Heather ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA
Sharma Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 5:32 AM
heartfelt emotions
Richards Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 5:50 PM
Oh........I love this! I identify with the way a song can take me to "that" place again.......(I LOVE THIS LINE!!!: ..."even the fruit held it's breath"......wow!! ps....and many thanks, Heather, for my placement in the 10 line contest! my honor with such wonderful poems entered! Thank you!
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 2:13 PM
heather!... so honored to have placed in your ' 10 lines' contest... thank you for allowing me to stretch my wings..:) huggs!
Hunter Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 6:50 AM
I gotta say...I love this! Ok...washed the car with soap and tears got me laughing...I spilled some coffee...thanks Heather. ;) A cousin of ours just graduated (one my wife was very close to) Anyway, my wife cried and cried and cried...at one point I told her.."look at the bright side...at least you can knit her a sweater with your tears."...credit that gem to Spongebob...haha
Onclaud Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 12:21 PM
sweetly poignant without missing a beat... you're a lightbulb!...:) huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 4:24 AM
Memories: Those delightful and loyal companions that accompany us to the end! Masterfully written bringing to life a world forgotten!
Manassian Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 10:17 PM
Sweet...very sweet Heather. Thank God for music and memories and poets who bring both to life. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Heather, I could have been you listening to those songs in early 70's. They do bring back such sweet memories. You are MY age?? Love it and as usual , another fave for me.
Ober Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Haha! I must admit, I'm only 25, but I discovered my Mum's Carole King albums at an early age and still love her music :)
Tacito Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Sigh. Never forgetting those that matter to us. This was beautiful.
Hendricks Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Such a beautiful write, Heather. A worthwhile trip down Memory Lane. I to this day love Carole King's music. Nice one. Licia :-)
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