Letter From Inner Child and Reply

come find me please
i need to be heard
i need to be loved for who i am
take care of me - i need nurturing
look after me as i spread my wings

i’m sorry i’m here i hear you
be yourself and never change
never lose track of your dreams
your zest for life is your edge
explore and enjoy
it’s what life is all about
don’t give up on me
i can be better
i love you just the way you are
always and forever



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on April 19, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/25/2020 10:53:00 PM
Your understanding of children is ringing loud and clear.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2020 10:58:00 AM
well, my inner child anyway... thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Lonna.
Date: 4/25/2020 1:45:00 AM
I was drawn in by your wonderful title and held captive by this inner dialogue. I think it's one we should all have, especially as poets. Thank you for this inspirational write, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/25/2020 7:14:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Date: 4/22/2020 3:26:00 PM
This poem is very touching, a feeling I myself have felt, but I even heard these very words mention out of my husband the months and weeks before he passed. He even wrote the poem "Angels in Flight" for Victor Buhagiar . https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/_he_took_his_last_breath___1055810 You have really touched my heart by reading my poems, Line, thank you. Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/22/2020 7:08:00 PM
Dear Eve, thank you so much for your lovely comment and for pointing me to your husband's poem ~ how precious.
Date: 4/21/2020 9:39:00 PM
Line, This is a very nice letter. Is it easier to ignore Peter Pan and the Wendy Bird? “Second star to the right and straight on 'til morning. ” ? J.M. Barrie
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/22/2020 12:45:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Richard.
Date: 4/21/2020 6:54:00 AM
I have an inner child, she is often making herself known to me- great write Line, stay safe.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/21/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, Julie. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/19/2020 8:43:00 PM
I think mine needs some of that. Tender write. xomo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/20/2020 7:07:00 AM
Lots of TLC . Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Maureen.
Date: 4/19/2020 5:53:00 PM
Hello Lin, the inner child we all have one. I speak to mine every night before sleep. Also in the morning. When i am upset igive my inner child a hug. Have a nice evening my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2020 12:30:00 PM
Hi Lin, this works for all the time.Have a nice day my friend. Be safe.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/20/2020 7:06:00 AM
That is one pampered inner child ~ great idea, Darlene.
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