Letter From Inner Child and Reply

come find me please
i need to be heard
i need to be loved for who i am
take care of me - i need nurturing
look after me as i spread my wings

i’m sorry i’m here i hear you
be yourself and never change
never lose track of your dreams
your zest for life is your edge
explore and enjoy
it’s what life is all about
don’t give up on me
i can be better
i love you just the way you are
always and forever



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
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Blodgett Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 10:53 PM
Your understanding of children is ringing loud and clear.
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 10:58 AM
well, my inner child anyway... thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Lonna.
Watt Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 1:45 AM
I was drawn in by your wonderful title and held captive by this inner dialogue. I think it's one we should all have, especially as poets. Thank you for this inspirational write, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Roper Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 3:26 PM
This poem is very touching, a feeling I myself have felt, but I even heard these very words mention out of my husband the months and weeks before he passed. He even wrote the poem "Angels in Flight" for Victor Buhagiar . https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/_he_took_his_last_breath___1055810 You have really touched my heart by reading my poems, Line, thank you. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 7:08 PM
Dear Eve, thank you so much for your lovely comment and for pointing me to your husband's poem ~ how precious.
Theraven Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Line, This is a very nice letter. Is it easier to ignore Peter Pan and the Wendy Bird? “Second star to the right and straight on 'til morning. ” ? J.M. Barrie
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 12:45 AM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Richard.
Achilles Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 6:54 AM
I have an inner child, she is often making herself known to me- great write Line, stay safe.
Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Thanks, Julie. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 8:43 PM
I think mine needs some of that. Tender write. xomo
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 7:07 AM
Lots of TLC . Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Maureen.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Hello Lin, the inner child we all have one. I speak to mine every night before sleep. Also in the morning. When i am upset igive my inner child a hug. Have a nice evening my friend. Be safe.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Hi Lin, this works for all the time.Have a nice day my friend. Be safe.
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 7:06 AM
That is one pampered inner child ~ great idea, Darlene.
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