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Let's Tango

Cheek to cheek, your hand in mine you draw me in, then swirl me round Inside your eyes I feel Divine like a gazelle in a forest ground Tango to tango lets dance all night beneath the moon of navy blue I will be, your phantasmal light with dainty wings of every hue Red on red with passion flair you will know that I'm your girl when you dip me, light as air I'll be your hour your dance unfurl Star on star together we will shine beneath the sky conjoined as one A passion dance done right on time with tango pulse, thats how its done.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2024 7:31:00 AM

- A lovely and romantic poem, Vie Rose :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/27/2024 4:22:00 AM

You have described the tango so well. You did a great job. I always loved the tango. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/5/2024 7:01:00 PM

its such a great dance Victor, thanks for commenting,

The Situation

Date: 3/26/2024 5:55:00 PM

I suppose some do this when finding each other and knowing the tango. For me it's just a slow dance. But this identifies the beauty of the dance with romance.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/26/2024 6:10:00 PM

Slow and easy, purposeful and filled with intent, that is how it should always be, thanks for reading The Situation :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/26/2024 4:34:00 PM

such a dreamy, romantic poem you created, so rhythmic and filled with the passion that is the tango. I especially liked 'star on star together we will shine...' I was left a little breathless. What a creative soul you are, dear Rose. Enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/26/2024 6:09:00 PM

Dancing is so good for the soul Sara, wish I had the energy of youth, to keep on dancing all night lol, thanks for reading

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/26/2024 6:11:00 AM

I like the rhythm of your poem, my friend. Passion filled and a joy to read.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/26/2024 6:09:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the poem Vijay, :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/26/2024 6:04:00 AM

Dear Rose, You evoke a whirlwind of emotions, as if dancing through a dreamscape. Each verse creates a picture of passion, unity, and grace. I loved your imagery of the dance floor as a celestial stage is enchanting. I also enjoyed the echoing of the beauty of connection and the allure of shared moments. We should embrace life's rhythms with enthusiasm and finesse. Thank you for this mesmerizing dance of words. - Blessings, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/26/2024 6:08:00 PM

I love all dances but the tango is a passionate step , pas a deux, thanks for reading Daniel

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2024 5:32:00 AM

Your poem beautifully captures the essence of a passionate and romantic dance, weaving together imagery and emotions to create a vivid scene. The opening lines evoke a sense of intimacy and connection, with the imagery of cheeks touching and hands intertwined, setting the stage for a mesmerizing dance.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/26/2024 6:08:00 PM

I only danced to the tango once many many years ago, he was an expert at it, I was not lol, it is a special dance, :)