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                April 10, 2026, entered in the Christopher Delegans Your City contest

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Let's Take a Walk

In my own microcosm of the world,
myriad blessings are daily unfurled.
To claim them, I don’t need my car, just my feet.
My frequent walks don’t end with my little street.                                           
Invariably friendly neighbors I meet.

If I need a doctor, a clinic is there,
right by the drugstore. When my fridge is bare,
I walk to the quick stop for lunch, milk, and bread
or down to the café with close friends instead.
There’s so much to see before daylight has fled.   

I pass by three churches, including my own;
an ice cream shop (I may drop in for a cone);
the library (I love a mystery book);
the charming boutique (Can I pass and not look?);
the park (right beside it, a train and a brook).    

I walk by the school—how the memories flow!—
then the coffee shop, where they have strong joe to go,
a shop where the ladies all do hair and nails,
the houses of some whose friendship never fails,
the “junk” store with really nice things during sales.  

With ability to take my walks, I am BLESSED.
They relieve and relax me when I’m feeling stressed.
I love the wide range of sounds, sights, and styles
experienced while walking not even two miles!
My heart’s always warmed by the waves and big smiles.


May 21, 2022
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George Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 2:37 AM
What a blessed place you live in, Janice . Everything is there within vicinity ! It will be so refreshing to have such a walk along the street passing the church, school, shops and what not. How I wish if I had such a neighbourhood ! Beautiful poem...
Leffanta Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Nice write! Such a pity billions do not enjoy such a life! Aloha!
Canerdy Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 11:42 AM
We are blessed. THANKS, Rico. Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 5:07 AM
I saw all those places you describe through your words, Janice. Nice to be able to walk to everything--reminisce in old memories, and create new ones. Great sights and sounds of your neighborhood. Your fondness comes through!
Canerdy Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 11:44 AM
I DO love my little town. Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Bauer Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 4:46 PM
This is very lovely, Janice! You’re lucky to be able to experience all that in your walks around the neighborhood…
Canerdy Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 6:47 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. For a small community, we do have a lot going on! Janice
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