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Let's Stay on This Page

Let's Stay on This Page

Let us cherish this night of star-splashed splendor;
freeze this mystical moment of love’s passion in time.
Don’t turn this page…love must not fade with the passing night.
Don’t let this magic end when madness strikes at midnight!

Freeze this mystical moment of love’s passion in time.
Free your soul to dance and sing in harmony with mine.
Don’t let this magic end when madness strikes at midnight…
not even the fleeting sands of time can erode this bliss! 

Free your soul to dance and sing in harmony with mine.
Don’t turn this page…love must not fade with the passing night.
Not even the fleeting sands of time can erode this bliss…
let us cherish this night of star-splashed splendor!


05-24-2017

Contest:      Another 2017 Stunner
Sponsor:      Line Gauthier 
Placement:   3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/20/2018 4:49:00 AM
- A great 3rd place in the contest, congratulations, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 4/20/2018 1:11:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for your kind words of congratulations which I greatly appreciate. Best wishes and hugs.Pandita
Date: 4/19/2018 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent Pantoum of romance.
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Date: 4/20/2018 1:10:00 PM
Hi Susan, thank you for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Thank you so much for the visit! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 4/19/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Pandita, with this passionate poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 4/20/2018 1:01:00 PM
Hi Line, I am delighted and honored to receive my bronze medal win! Thank you so very much! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/10/2017 2:08:00 PM
When a relationship is so good, we want to stay on that page for as long as we can! We fear that if we turn the paage, the magic will be gone. Excellent piece that I enjoyed reading! Hugs. Kika
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/12/2017 12:10:00 PM
Hi Kika, thank you for your kind words of praise which I greatly appreciate. I am so happy you enjoyed this piece. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/4/2017 3:42:00 PM
Yes, this is a poetic page to be cherished, too, Pandita! I immensely enjoyed this Pantoum in all its splendor. gl if it's for the contest. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/6/2017 10:50:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paul, for your visit and uplifting compliments/comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Pandita.
Date: 6/4/2017 12:11:00 PM
A beautiful piece, Pandita. Excellent rendition of the form, that touches the heart. Well done, my friend. Regards, John.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/4/2017 12:46:00 PM
Hi John, I'm so happy you liked this piece and complimented it! Thank you so much for the visit! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 5/27/2017 6:18:00 AM
A "night of star splashed splendor" is a wonderful thing. Well penned Pandita...hugs
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/30/2017 11:17:00 AM
Thank you dear Joseph for your very kind complimentary words! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/25/2017 5:24:00 PM
A lovely pantoum, Pandita! Cherish each moment in verse!
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Date: 5/26/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thank you dear Kim for your very kind complimentary words! You made my day! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs. Pandita