Pandita Sietesantos Poet Pantoum

Let's Stay On This Page

Let's Stay on This Page

Let us cherish this night of star-splashed splendor;
freeze this mystical moment of love’s passion in time.
Don’t turn this page…love must not fade with the passing night.
Don’t let this magic end when madness strikes at midnight!

Freeze this mystical moment of love’s passion in time.
Free your soul to dance and sing in harmony with mine.
Don’t let this magic end when madness strikes at midnight…
not even the fleeting sands of time can erode this bliss! 

Free your soul to dance and sing in harmony with mine.
Don’t turn this page…love must not fade with the passing night.
Not even the fleeting sands of time can erode this bliss…
let us cherish this night of star-splashed splendor!


05-24-2017

Contest:      Another 2017 Stunner
Sponsor:      Line Gauthier 
Placement:   3rd

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Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2018 at 4:49 AM - A great 3rd place in the contest, congratulations, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Pandita Sietesantos April 20, 2018 at 1:11 PM Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for your kind words of congratulations which I greatly appreciate. Best wishes and hugs.Pandita

Susan Gentry April 19, 2018 at 9:59 PM Congratulations on your win with this excellent Pantoum of romance. Pandita Sietesantos April 20, 2018 at 1:10 PM Hi Susan, thank you for your kind congratulatory words and compliments! Thank you so much for the visit! Best regards. Pandita

Line Gauthier April 19, 2018 at 5:17 PM Thanks for entering my contest, Pandita, with this passionate poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win. Pandita Sietesantos April 20, 2018 at 1:01 PM Hi Line, I am delighted and honored to receive my bronze medal win! Thank you so very much! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Kika Ayala June 10, 2017 at 2:08 PM When a relationship is so good, we want to stay on that page for as long as we can! We fear that if we turn the paage, the magic will be gone. Excellent piece that I enjoyed reading! Hugs. Kika Pandita Sietesantos June 12, 2017 at 12:10 PM Hi Kika, thank you for your kind words of praise which I greatly appreciate. I am so happy you enjoyed this piece. Hugs. Pandita

Paul Callus June 4, 2017 at 3:42 PM Yes, this is a poetic page to be cherished, too, Pandita! I immensely enjoyed this Pantoum in all its splendor. gl if it's for the contest. ~ Warm regards // paul Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2017 at 10:50 AM Thank you very much, Paul, for your visit and uplifting compliments/comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Pandita.

John Michaels June 4, 2017 at 12:11 PM A beautiful piece, Pandita. Excellent rendition of the form, that touches the heart. Well done, my friend. Regards, John. Pandita Sietesantos June 4, 2017 at 12:46 PM Hi John, I'm so happy you liked this piece and complimented it! Thank you so much for the visit! Best regards. Pandita

Joseph May May 27, 2017 at 6:18 AM A "night of star splashed splendor" is a wonderful thing. Well penned Pandita...hugs Pandita Sietesantos May 30, 2017 at 11:17 AM Thank you dear Joseph for your very kind complimentary words! Hugs. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues May 25, 2017 at 5:24 PM A lovely pantoum, Pandita! Cherish each moment in verse! Pandita Sietesantos May 26, 2017 at 11:18 AM Thank you dear Kim for your very kind complimentary words! You made my day! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs. Pandita