Probir Gupta Poet Senryu

Let's Seek a Sweet Lake

summer forest heat
thirst in thin cracks of your lips
let's seek a  sweet lake
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September 3, 2019
Sing Me A Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy
Song : Señorita
Shawn Mendes
Camila Cabello

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James Inman October 5, 2019 at 9:39 AM Quite sensual Probir. Nice write that expresses the sentiment of the song nicely.

Constance La France October 3, 2019 at 5:12 PM Probir congratulations on your win in the contest! Probir Gupta October 4, 2019 at 9:08 AM Thank you, Dear Heart ...

Line Gauthier October 3, 2019 at 4:24 PM Congrats on your win, Probir. Probir Gupta October 4, 2019 at 9:08 AM Thank you, Line ...

Jeanne Mcgee October 3, 2019 at 2:13 PM I hope I can find this on the web...love your words in the senryu...congratulations on a great win.

Paul Callus October 3, 2019 at 2:07 PM You chose a lovely romantic Latin-Pop song, Probir, and your senryu reflects the feelings which the song projects. Congratulations on a merited win. Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 3, 2019 at 9:30 AM I love this. Thank you Probir! Congratulations on your win. xomo Probir Gupta October 4, 2019 at 9:12 AM Thank you, Maureen ...

Janice Canerdy September 3, 2019 at 4:20 PM Very appealing, well done, Probir! Janice Probir Gupta October 4, 2019 at 9:15 AM Thank you, Janice ...