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Let's Seek a Sweet Lake

summer forest heat thirst in thin cracks of your lips let's seek a sweet lake __________________________________ September 3, 2019 Sing Me A Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy Song : Señorita Shawn Mendes Camila Cabello

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James Inman

Date: 10/5/2019 9:39:00 AM

Quite sensual Probir. Nice write that expresses the sentiment of the song nicely.

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2019 5:12:00 PM

Probir congratulations on your win in the contest!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/4/2019 9:08:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Heart ...

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/3/2019 4:24:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/4/2019 9:08:00 AM

Thank you, Line ...

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/3/2019 2:13:00 PM

I hope I can find this on the web...love your words in the senryu...congratulations on a great win.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/3/2019 2:07:00 PM

You chose a lovely romantic Latin-Pop song, Probir, and your senryu reflects the feelings which the song projects. Congratulations on a merited win. Regards // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/3/2019 9:30:00 AM

I love this. Thank you Probir! Congratulations on your win. xomo

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/4/2019 9:12:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen ...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/3/2019 4:20:00 PM

Very appealing, well done, Probir! Janice

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/4/2019 9:15:00 AM

Thank you, Janice ...