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Let's Rhyme

The storm of last night brought cool air
Tree frogs have much news now to share
Perfect weather for their rainwear
Clouds everywhere, clouds everywhere

Fog in the hollow tops the creek
This gift of gray clouds' cool not bleak 
Sheer shawl fog adds its mystique
Veils of Batik, veils of Batik

The roosters in the hollow sing
Chorus of anthems loudly ring
Air holds song accelerating
God conducting, God conducting 

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023

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Judy Ball Date: 12/13/2023 3:33:00 PM Lovely Sara. Reminds me of the countryside after a rain. Everything so clean and fresh. Nicely done. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/13/2023 4:30:00 PM Thank you, Judy, and Merry Christmas to you and your family. Sara K

Sotto Poet Date: 12/9/2023 2:16:00 PM Sara, your poem exemplifies beauty to the highest degree; it stands out by its remarkable distinctiveness and enticing appeal. Not only it is captivating, but also enticing, best of luck with the contest Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/10/2023 3:41:00 AM Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Don't you just love that colorful frog. Sara K

Jude Herrick Date: 12/9/2023 12:59:00 PM Woven and thought out nicely. Even, cute. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 1:03:00 PM Why, thank you, Jude. I appreciate the nice comments. Sara K

Hilo Poet Date: 12/9/2023 12:02:00 PM A beauty, Sara, truly unique. Very tempting bit of nature well defined, and inviting. Much enjoyed my friend. Aloha, William Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 12:50:00 PM Aloha to you, William. I appreciate the definition of a beauty. Sara K

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/9/2023 7:29:00 AM The roosters in the hollow sing Chorus of anthems loudly ring Air holds song accelerating God conducting, God conducting --such a wonderful ending to your rhythmic poem, Sara! Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 8:25:00 AM Why, thank you, Vijay. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sara K

Daniel Turner Date: 12/9/2023 6:52:00 AM Such a peaceful read this morning, Mrs Sara. I love it when a fog hovers over a creek:) Merry Christmas! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 7:17:00 AM Glad that you liked it, Daniel. I hope this is a great Christmas for you and your family. I appreciate the smiley face. Your visit adds a special touch. Sara K

Hiya Sharma Date: 12/9/2023 5:13:00 AM This is such a lovely piece dear, reflecting that God's light always shines upon hearts even in times of foggy days.. You've created such a scenic ambience here with your mesmerizing words and imageries! "Sheer shawl fog adds its mystique", "The roosters in the hollow sing,Chorus of anthems loudly ring" Such artistic wordplay here & that last stanza is just so wonderful! Sending you love and light, dear poetess :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 6:42:00 AM Yes, there have been many foggy days here lately. Yes, those roosters did ring out at one time. The man who had them moved and we no longer enjoy their song. Thanks for the nice comments on my work and the smiley face. Sara K

Lin Lane Date: 12/9/2023 4:54:00 AM Hi Sara. You did a fantastic job of writing in the Monotetra form that I really enjoy!! Well done. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 12/9/2023 6:37:00 AM ;-) thanks, Sara Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 6:34:00 AM Thank you, Lin. I am glad you told me it is in monotetra. LOL..I did not know what it was other than monorhyme. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Ink Empress Date: 12/9/2023 4:05:00 AM I love this and what w cute picture to go with this poem. You rhyme so well and the opening is brilliant in this. I love the flow too so lyrical. I love especially “ Sheer shawl fog adds its mystique Veils of Batik, veils of Batik” and also “ The roosters in the hollow sing Chorus of anthems loudly ring” brilliant so creative. Pleasure always reading you, sending you light always Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 6:33:00 AM IE, it is always a delight to have you drop by because your comments add such a nice uplifting, encouraging exchange. Thank you for your support. Sara K

Silent One Date: 12/9/2023 4:00:00 AM Great rhymes, Sara, this one flows so well and such a lovely choice for the contest.. God is always conducting.. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2023 6:32:00 AM Why, thank you, SO. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K