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Written on November 28, 2023

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let's rhyme

She stared into the lonely skies, Wings in cobalt sought to chastise, With breathless tears she always tries, Giving esteem to the laughing sunrise. She sat beneath glittering stars, so wise, Listening to the stillness, trying to surmise Would the swelling seas believe her lies, As the rushing waves continue to surprise. She began to feel dreams, like butterflies, Remembering the joy their light implies, Kindling wonders her faith would baptize, Prompting the heart who continues to fantasize. Wherever she goes, she’s known to empathize – With those who are hurting, those she’ll surmise, Are often mourning, living with grief she’d advise… Souls to touch the light that shines when worry dies.
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Jones Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 12:19 AM
This is lovely. Oh and the rhyme flows well. Picture is nice too. Congrats on your placement.
Hamilton Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 6:59 AM
well done on placing in my contest Gina perfect flow to your rhyme Hugs Shadow
Brotherton Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 6:09 AM
A perfect monorhyme my friend. Your words flow smoothly and leave such marvelous imagery in their wake. Masterfully done my friend.
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