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Why not say you’re mistaken, it was the wind that you heard? And when I dropped to my knee, I hadn't uttered a word. Why don't you just shrug it off, and admonish me out loud? Let’s pretend, 'twas but a game to amuse the passing crowd. If we say it didn’t happened, can we not forget this eve? And should you feel offended, just ask me to, and I'll leave. But, what if I did propose, and those words came from my heart? And now, I'm crying inside cause you tore my hopes apart. (Quatrain) 2/3/2015

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Date: 5/12/2018 10:51:00 PM
Awesome. A very emotive poem, Emile. Bravo.
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Date: 5/13/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Line, for all of your continued support. Emile.
Date: 2/4/2015 5:01:00 AM
A sad romantic poem that's very touching, good work Emile :)
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Date: 2/4/2015 7:07:00 AM
Thanks Mohamed, I value your opinion. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2015 1:13:00 PM
Hey Emile; with the wonderful gift of words that you write, who could not forgive you? A wonderful expression of a hopeful heart. I love it. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Neva, you brought a smile to my lips. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2015 10:44:00 AM
Love it
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Date: 2/3/2015 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Mona, you made me smile. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2015 10:12:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Emile...very Shakespearean!! :) john. 7 from me!
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Date: 2/3/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2015 9:19:00 AM
Great pen Emile! a 7 from me! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 2/3/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Dorian, I can always count on you for a smile. Emile.
Date: 2/3/2015 8:57:00 AM
Love this ... so moving ... thank you!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/3/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Jean, I appreciate your kind words. Emile.

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