Let's Pretend

Why not say you’re mistaken, it was the wind that you heard? And when I dropped to my knee, I hadn't uttered a word. Why don't you just shrug it off, and admonish me out loud? Let’s pretend, 'twas but a game to amuse the passing crowd. If we say it didn’t happened, can we not forget this eve? And should you feel offended, just ask me to, and I'll leave. But, what if I did propose, and those words came from my heart? And now, I'm crying inside cause you tore my hopes apart. (Quatrain) 2/3/2015
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Gauthier Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 10:51 PM
Awesome. A very emotive poem, Emile. Bravo.
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Thanks Line, for all of your continued support. Emile.
Adel  Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 5:01 AM
A sad romantic poem that's very touching, good work Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Mohamed, I value your opinion. Emile.
Romaine Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Hey Emile; with the wonderful gift of words that you write, who could not forgive you? A wonderful expression of a hopeful heart. I love it. Be Blessed, Neva
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Thanks Neva, you brought a smile to my lips. Emile.
Karaki Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Love it
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Thanks Mona, you made me smile. Emile.
Fleming Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Beautifully penned, Emile...very Shakespearean!! :) john. 7 from me!
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Great pen Emile! a 7 from me! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Thanks Dorian, I can always count on you for a smile. Emile.
Omalley Polatnick Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Love this ... so moving ... thank you!
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Jean, I appreciate your kind words. Emile.
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