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Lets Play

Why all these games? Lame excuses from a mediocre dame! Okay!! We can play, I've won this contest before, you attention whore! Score!! Despite hesitation she's at my door, at four, in risque lingerie. I'll feed into this charade! well played!! Jared Pickett 3/5/2014 Asavvy1

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Jiril Clemons

Date: 3/9/2014 3:09:00 PM

Wow, great piece Jared. Such emotion, and blunt honesty in this short amazing piece. Great energy felt through your imagery. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/10/2014 8:10:00 AM

On my way brewha!!Asavvy1

Skat A

Date: 3/5/2014 8:51:00 AM

WOW! Jared, all is fun and games, until the masquerade comes off. Ha-ha, love how you gave in and walked your own plank. Enjoyed! SKAT

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/5/2014 9:19:00 AM

Thank you for visiting!Asavvy1

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/5/2014 9:18:00 AM

And jumped in, good thing I am an experienced swimmer!!;-)Asavvy1